rate_review Reviews

Oh this is such a sweet and touching short. It's beautiful. Due to lack of sleep, one of the names sounds familiar. Hahah~ I'll probably figure it out after some sleep. Thanks for the short! Greatly appreciated. I'm trying to remember if there is a full story on what happened before this short to the characters in the story or not. And if there isn't any, I'd love to read a novel of it.

Mitts

Oh boy oh boy oh boy...Who would have thought those two would have made a couple? lol
But ummmm...Jan was there at the dance? Is that some sort of dark foreboding for Lark and Sactaren...its obvious Jan still has a soft spot for Sactaren, despite his so say hated of him...
Really good little story Katica..a small foretaste of whats to come between Lark and Sactaren eh? I hope so...

Nice, I like how you take two characters that act as antagonists in Once a Slave and put them in a better light. Like, "sure these guys make Lark's life difficult, but they are not all bad." I was not expecting much from a oneshot, but this is really good, sexy and sweet. I kinda hope you do offshoots more often ^.^

^_^ That was... how shall I put this? It was something like hot chocolate; hot and sweet. With cream on top of course. ;)

I really enjoyed the side story. I somehow hope you manage to write a little more about the two or integrate them into the rest and give us a peak every once in a while. I'm a sucker for happy endings!

Aww. This is adoreable. And erotic. Mostly adoreable though. I loved it, and can only say that I hope at that Besteth gets his dick back in the future, although I must add that the more you write about Sacteran the more and more I hate him.