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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but at the same time I am not sure what to think of. At first with it's title I thought it was set during Arthurian times, and then you said she was an English high society girl I though oh early 1900's which I thought would be cool because no one really writes about those times in this section. But then you said her phone was ringing and I was thinking what the hell. I think you should continue with it, even though it confused me at some time. Although her boyfriend seems a little weird, I want to hear more about the french boy.