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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ummm where are the spaces between the paragraphs? The idea is great but the finesse is lacking. I would suggest a re-write with more detail. And make it much longer. Beauty and the Beast was a beautifully written love story. But you can make it your own. Make it darker. More angst. More sexual tension. Give it some "Oomph!"