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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Amanda
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats really really good i love it and i cant wait to start reading more please post again soon
person ember
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I can't wait for it to be continued!
Thanks for sharing such yummyness with your readers!
person Weirkat
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story plot, and I love the characters.

I'm really happy that your name, and the link to your story was given out in Kira's group. Otherwise I would have never known about it.

I was entralled with the story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for sharing your fantasy world.
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that I am absolutely in love with this story. I am in awe of it. I love how Max is coming to terms with being an "anal nymphomaniac", I crack up everytime he has a panic attack. I also love how he completely loses control when having sex with Kasan. He's the perfect Uke!

That last sex scene, against the wall? I LOVED IT! it was so hot and impossibly erotic that I've already read your story like 5 times in the last week and a half. I have bookmarked this story and I check it almost every day to see if it's been updated.

PLEASE update! I only came upon this story about 2 weeks ago, so I'm not sure of your update schedule, but I will continue to faithfully check as much as I can.

I've been wondering... Exactly how long was Max in uh...what do you call it? Cryo-sleep? You know, where he's frozen? I forget what it's called. But anyway, how long was he in that state? Because he's taking about Humans in the present tense and Kasan and his fellow Cats are taking about Humans in the past tense.

Was Max lost in space or something and he outlived all the humans? I'm just wondering cause it seems like Kasan's planet wouldn't just go on about "The Last Pure Human" if there were humans out there somewhere. Except I seem to remember him mentioning something about "hidden sects of humans"...

Oh well. I'm just enthralled by your story and what to know EVERYTHING!

Also, I wonder when Max is gonna realize that he hasn't JUST been getting f*cked, but LOVED as well. I can already tell Kasan is falling for him fast. I also can't wait for the inevitable scene where they actually "make love" because so far it's been hard and fast. The "against the wall" scene was the first time they kissed during sex. Yummy!

So, sorry for the ramblings. Just know that I am addicted to this fic and you are amazing and please update!!! Thanks!
person Tatiana
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. The description lends itself well and provides a clear image. I like the slow development of the characters and it doesn't seem to predictable. I would like to know how often you update, I really wanna keep reading.
person fudgebaby
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this story, and can't wait for the next chapter!
person Draqua
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have to say that this is the single best piece of Slash fiction I have read in a long time. The characterisation is excellent, even on minor characters like the guards and the brothers; you can immediately understand their own little quirks and interests. In addition, I adore Kasan’s personality, he’s so strong yet caring, and the way he lavishes attention on Max makes me just melt. Max is a delight within himself, as he acts the way a real straight male would if they were to ever wake up in his conditions, I love how Max never does the typical uke thing; he’s very believable. The erotic scenes are well balanced and fleshed out with those cute interaction scenes in between.
In the future, I’d like a scene where Max strokes Kasan’s ears like he did in the first chapters and Kasan purrs like a motor boat, now THAT’D be hot!
Thanks for writing and update soon.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I finish a new chapter of Its my life and I see that this story is updated. Well that just makes my day. Nice to see the language barrier is slowly being broken, which is nice. Still confused as to what was up with the pink blob thing, for some reason it made me think of "The Blob" movie.
person tutyfrty
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most entertaining stories I have read in a long time. Every chapter had me laughing out loud. I am so looking forward to reading more about these guys. Your sense of humor is so easy to appreciate and connect with. Thanks for sharing this, looking forward to the rest of this continuing saga. It is so well written and so funny, a joy to read.
person Raeshi
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I thought you Inuyasha stories were good but this is even better. Wow this is one of my favourites in the original category. Still love Inu stories too. The Best Damn Orgasmn chapter one of the hottest ever!! I wonder if more humans will be found for the twins.