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You evil, evil author! No updates for a month? Noooooooooooo.

I'll be waiting eagerly.

ohh come on..we need more!!

more please

Wow! Just finally finished catching up with your story, The Last Pure Human... I love it! I'm already looking forward to the next update... I do hope it will be soon. I wish AFF had a way to notify me when your new chapters came up... But I'll bookmark this and keep looking for new stuff!

The story is great. When's the next chapter coming? What exactly was the pink blob? I really enjoy it. Nice and kinky, keep writting.

Hi just found this fic today and have been enjoying it a great deal; you had me holding in laughter so people wouldn't think I was crazy as I read i.e. when Max's guard had to explain that he'd been peed on; thanks for the fun; hope to see more soon!

ha ha ha! i'd hate to b in Gisho's shoes! confused dream like state! even more i'd hate to b is Kasan! to die cause i can't mate??? i'd hate to find out who'd i'd be mated to!

awesome tight ass intro with some cool ass characters!! awesome work! keep it up!! i'm rooting for ya!!!

D: I don't know if I have not reviewed this chapter yet or if I've reviewed it more than once (I tend to re-read the most recent chapter update to stories I like again and again...it's all embarrassing when the author notices my re-commenting...aha)

:D I just love Max's super lingual intelligence! I'm too impressed (plus I wish I was such I quick language learner. It would make Spanish class so much easier). You know what else I like about your writing? You notice natural things that some people might not. For instance!:

"Max shifted his feet a little and did an odd wave with his hand. “Ah’ll be back soon pre-shus.”

The fact that Kasan wouldn't recognize the gesture as a goodbye wave. I can definitely see most authors looking right over that. (: SO! Lovely job. And pretty please update soon! D: I feel like such a nag...I shouldn't even be whining, since you update so quickly. Ah, but this and 'Uke' are most definitely my favorites of your stories, and I can never ever wait for the newest update. (D: And I have just now realized that it's probably way more proper to say 'most new')

lol i love teh blob <3 he's all like run away!!! the puppy seems really cust too. i wanna puppy that fights off evil pink blobs!! ok i'll let you get back to your life now ^^

i love it!!! it's cute, fun, hot.... great!! please update like really soon... like now!!