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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Jem
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, it's rare that I like an original story as much as I like this one.
Your characters amazing, and not at all stereotyped. The storyline, while at first seemed strange to me, is very original and really pulls you in.
As I'm sure everyone already says, update asap ;)
person Weirkat
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you SO much for the update! I loved it! I hope you enjoy your holiday and looking forward to when you return and can work on posting again.

schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh not a whole month we loooooove max and kasin
we wait with baited breath for ur next delicious installment
person butterpie
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yakkin, huh? Rather nice custom of allowing the consorts to meet Max and welcome him into their family, and booze it up together. Interesting choice of gifts too, especially the picture books. I especially enjoyed poor Kasan missing his sweet mate and showing a little tenderness toward his lil Gisho. Hopefully more information will be found on the rest of Max's people too. It's nice to see Max starting to consider a relationship with Kasan. I look forward to your next installment. And as always please continue.
person miles
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you update !!
I like this story very much... And I can't wait for the next chapter... ^^
person Brenda
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. Please write more...one month such a long wait. But its always worth the wait. Cat people are so cool...kink rocks.
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A party with a bunch of pervy cats! the dildos were a riot!!!
person Duelriel
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've just been ITCHING for an update, and I'm glad you could spit one out before leaving. I'm anxious to read more!
person Ryuk
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon - I loved it ;)

I admit to a certain confusion with the continuity of the chapter, how it skipped from POV and also time in the same go, but it worked really well I think; it's a unique style and it keeps the piece interesting throughout. I haven't got bored once reading this story and I love the characters. You should deffinately aim to be a published writer, you could make it big, honestly.
person tf
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up late and was happy to have caught this update; I hope Max learns more of their language soon b/c I'm curious about what some of the cats say; also wondering why everyone thinks pure humans are extinct and yet Max remembers Earth; looking forward to more!