rate_review Reviews

I loved it! I'm glad Kasan sort of explained things to Max and seeing Leero go through his heat sounds fun; keep up the good work!

Thank you! at last! An update, it was worth the wait though. I LOVE the way Max thinks he has an STD its hilarious...now if a guy came up and said "have to have sex or I'll die" better not give them any more idea's for cheesie lines.

Keep it going, tis brilliant!

Oh my god, I've missed this story so much. I'm delighted over the update, but more so I was wonderfully surprised on how clearer and smoother your writting has gotten in the hiatus. Impressive.

YYAAYYYYY!!!!!!!!! u are so awesome!!!!!!

"NO SEX MIRROR!" lol! Omg, that was great XD I would be laughin right along with Kasan, that is for sure! Max is soooo sweet when he tries to make Kasan understand him XD Seriously, I want one. A Max and Kasan set! Just, ya know, put 'em in my closet... along with Captain Jack Sparrow, Will Turner, Agent Jeffrey Sands, and El Mariachi lmao. I think they'd get along nicely, don't you? :P

LOVED the update mate! Can't wait 'till my next installment! ^_^ Weeeee!

Worth the wait...

Ah...Leero...he's always been my favorite XD It'll be really interesting to see who he ends up taking...even if it's a new character (although really...Zonta would be absolutely adorable..then again I'm Biased.).

CHAPTER 14
Loved it. This chapter by far is the kinkiest one. That mirror scene was described spectacularly well; made me sweat a bit :) What is it about crossing out Max, though? Only Kasan would die without sex, right? Max wouldn't. Alien STD, hehehe! I liked that the first thing Max thought was not infecting people from the human colony he believes exist. He is emphatetic to others and I like that. The dog stealing Max's sex toys bit made me laugh. Would be funny when someone'll find them.

What is going to happen to poor Leero, though? He MUST find a mate before the end of heat, or he'll die. Or not? Poor thing, no family of his own and overworked to the point of not having any social life. How does it work, again? Would his potential mate have to be in heat too or just unclaimed? And if Leero claims one, does that mean that his partner will not have a heat of his/her own?

wow very hot very cute
hope u dont go way again i love this story and really hope to see more updates soon ill give u a cookie :D

PLEASE UPDATE THIS FIC!
how did max end up in the slavers hands anyway, and where are the other humans?
ASOTA

kay so like... you haven't abandoned us have you?