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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kasan is hot!
person Weirkat
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT! It was amusing of how Kasan explained to Max about having to HAVE sex, and it was good to see Max think over the problem and come to accept it. Well sort of accept it, but it was funny.

You really have a way of making the story touching and amusing at the same time. I thank you so much for sharing your story.

You are an excellent writer, and your story is totally hot and well written.

K
person Rosei
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Lots of fun!! Still love the two lovebirds and Max's responses!!!
Max is just too hysterical!!

Thanks for coming back!!!
R
person butterpie
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, those two having sex was so damn hot! Kasan is so intense in his desire for his consort, even when it is tempered with a humorous light in his eyes as Max seeks to deny his lust for him. I just love how you make Max so internally frustrated as he tries to rationalize Kasan's need for him. The poor guys' ego must be taking quite a bashing as he now realizes that sex is mandatory for both of them, or face a litheral death sentence. Also poor Leero must be equally frustrated as he is now in heat and must find a mate as well. This marvelous story of yours is so wonderfully unique and addictive. So don't stop now and please continue.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my... UHM!! That was too good. And gorgeously funny. Damnit! I can't believe how much I enjoy this, but you have a hold on me!! Hahaha. Uh yeah I'm at a loss for words. Oh yeah, I wonder who's Leero's consort is gonna be. Can't wait for that. And another question... How do you pronounce Androcles? Hahaha smartest damned dog alien thing that can put away sex toys and what not hahaha. UNtil next update!!

Happy writing and muses!!
person sarunotoki
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness! (I only just realised I could review without an account here - *facepalm*)

heat!Leero is hilarious and oh so tragic T_T I love the piece in his POV that gives more insight into his character (lol, ok, I'm a sucker for characters as they seem vs. characters as they are in themselves) and he's really just a big softy! (awww) :D

I'm really curious about Androcles! I keep expecting him to turn out to be some evil Shovak spy or some enemy from another shapeshifting dog race or some animal that's super poisonous to Kyashin or... something :P Anything that isn't good and results in disaster O.o Though I'm loving how cool Max thinks he is :D Moving the sex toys = total win! This gave me the best image, for some reason :D

And, of course, Max and Kasan are absolutely made of awesome :D I love Kasan's little stick figures! And Max trying so hard to retain his resolve in the face of sexy cat men and unexpected kinks, even though he's clearly failing miserably :P

This whole chapter was just - hot, and sweet :D Kasan laughing at the end just gave me all kinds of warm fuzzies :D Stunning, as always :)
person Sekre
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid cat!! Lols, love this story girl.
person Jem
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am SO HAPPY! I almost gave up on this story, which is really sad because it's my favourite x3 Thanks for putting story status on your profile =]
Ha ha, poor Max. He still has no clue what's going on.
person miles
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They're so cute together !
Hummmm ! I wonder who Leero is going to choose ?
person SODA
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really hot! Max is so funny, and I could picture his expression so perfectly when he sadi "...no sex mirrors." I cracked up lol. Um, do you have a larger version and wih color of your main icon? I think you had a link to it up once, but when I looked through the cahpters I couldnt find it. Anyway, fantastic chapter!! Cant wait to read more! Great chapter, update soon please!!!