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This was excellent. More attempts at communication here, and interesting how Max's body does not agree with his mind on his mate. Kasan's brothers on the other hand got exactly what they deserved for their stupid prank. Clearly their timing was off, and payback is looking good right about now- ouch!!! Hopefully once service begins Kasan will be kept too busy with Max for his brothers to run more interference, and further embarassment for him or them. So don't stop now, and please continue.

Woohoo! You never disappoint! I just can't say how much I adore this story! So damn hot and steamy– and hilarious! Can't wait for Kasan's 'Service' to begin- and I wonder how much his brothers are going to do to get back at him for this pummeling! hehe.

Thank you for updating, I just love this story. I just hope we get to know soon how Max got to be where he is in the first place, as well as what happened to the other humans. Also, thank you for the long chapters, it makes the long wait between updates worth while. ^_^ Great work!

yaaaaaaaaaaay! an update! and the great news that another chapter is already partly written! I can't wait for more...

Is Kasan going to take the video ?
Very funny chapter...

omg i love you!!!!! i've been waiting soooooo long for this next chapter!!! thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!

Oh my God! You are so hilarious! I love theses guys, Max and Kasan they so beautiful together. Poor Kasan trying to be understanding and keeping Max on his side of the bed only to give in, I laughed so much. And Kasan’s brothers what evil little pranksters they are, somebody better call a medic for them. Now I don’t really understand about being in service, and I thought that now Max is Kasan’s consort that he was told by Zonta that they are married? So why would Kasan be worried about having a commitment with Max if they are married? I need to go back and read the chapters again maybe I missed something. But I am really confused what it means to be in service to his brother or Max? I love this story so much and was in agony waiting for an update and when I saw you updated it made me so happy. Can you tell? I am so hooked, hummm I wonder if the nanites infected me too and made inpatient to read more of your story. You have such a wonderful imagination and are so talented; oh I wish I could have one quarter of your writing skill, I am in awe of you. So you can imagine how I felt when you reviewed me, thanks so much for that, I was like on cloud 9 when I read it, it was like royalty visiting my home. I hope you are doing better so glad to see back to the story and I will await patiently for your next update. Such a beautiful story thanks so much for writing it.

It was so nice to see more from this story, been a long time I've really missed reading your stuff. Hee, hee so I guess the boys forgot that little point of just when service started didn't they? For future rulers they really have a problem with remembering some details don't they? Hmm, for someone not really wanting sex Max really is eager at night when he should be sleeping. Is there a reason for this? Does him being there have anything to do with the sudden influx of new heats? Don't tell me the nanites combined with a human is like catnip to these guys and throwing them into heat. Or is there some other reason? Can't wait to see how Max reacts to the service, having Kaasan wait on him and seeing Kaasan in the collar and leash. I hope the brothers are still able to make it to First Meal. Will the new guard ever get a good look at Max? They are seem so interested in him, trying to peek in when giving messages and all (too funny). Keep up the great work, thank you for the new chapter, hope to see more from you. Take care.

littleolmee

yay, update .. I loved it. The fanart was awesome.

Wow... so great that you finally updated... I just love your story... Although I have to start reading everything all over again because I don't remember the details... but it's simply great...
So, what can our beloved seme do with his tail? Looking forward for the next chapter to find out ... Hugs, SH