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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great Kasan and Max or so cute together and I have to say I can't blame Max I would probably attack Kasan in my sleep too.
person Blume
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I love this story. It's romantic, funny and has some drama. And a great storyline. Please continue with it! : )))
person BennyPeace
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so so much,
person bambi4real
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you updated this one. My favorite part was the ending in the screening room. It was too funny when they realized their mistake.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO!! It ended toooo soon! I want more!! All that teasing and nothing following it!! Grrr how frustrating, haha. But uhm, great chapter as always. Just can't get enough of this story... Seriously. I was so excited to see an update. SOO, I'm wondering how Kasan's service is gonna be and how everyone will react. And his brothers so deserved the beating they got hahaha! Also, I'm expecting some juicy love making! So hop to iy and don't make me wait long!!!


Until next time! I think i'll go check out those fanart pictures.
person TheSiner
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Was so waiting for this. A good story this is. So well written and a rare occasion when writing the same scene from two different POVs is alright, even needed.
person Jetfire
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! You updated at last, this is sooo great. I love this story. Kasan rules, big brother"s need to be beat, mine does anyway...pity i'm no good at it. carry on the allmighty great work please. PLEASE with nobs on.

THANK YOU
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok I am officially ready to bow down to ur amazing writing ability! Ur just beyoubd words! have u ever thought of having one of these stories published? I know id buy them 4 sure. Well I hope u were right about a good part of the next chapter being done, so another one will be up soon!!!!!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YESHH!!! they got their ass kicked!!!!!!
person cfweber1b
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so its only the nanites that make Max so easily turned on for Kasan. sure. I like the brother relationship - its fun its sex on a stick and I want more, lots more.
Service is going to be interesting.