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MAN, I FICKEN LOVE this story, to no end. It is SO SO great. I am so happy that you updated it. I have been checking it constantly and I was a little scared that it had been pushed to the wayside. I am kind of sad that the sex in this chapter was not there. :( :( Still hot, though, having the guards listen to it from outside. I am very excited to see what happens when KAsan puts that collar on. It has the potential to be VERY hot. Awesome. I also loved the part at the end where the one guard outside of the video room is trying to convince the other guard to not go inside.

This fic is so funny. My favorites are Max's reactions to everything, especially during sex. Cause he wants it so bad, but is so in denial. Aww. I love how sweetly in love Kasan is with Max. I can't wait till Max becomes more willing in the sexual part of their relationship (also the emotional part, but who CARES about EMOTIONS, *cackle*) . And then they can have lots and lots of hot sex, and maybe some rape play, which I never thought was hot until I read Sweet Puppy on (hp.AFF.N).

It will be interesting to see when Max learns enough of the language to communicate. But then he will find out that there are no more humans (probably-- it would be really sad though to realize that). Is their wedding stuff all done now, or is there more? It would be fun to see more, if not necessarily for the wedding, at least other ceremonies or parties.

great chapter. I loved it a lot. Please update again soon! It would make me so, so happy :)

Hey, welcome back! It's so great to have an update on my fave pairing! The wait was worth it... 'Purr

I have to admit, I'm completely enamoured with this story.
But I feel sorry for both of them too. In Kasan's case, once he does realize what's been going through Max's mind all this time, he's going to be heartbroken. In Max's case, you seem to be hinting that he's been in stasis for a very long time, so he really will be the only human left, and all his family is long gone.

I was thrilled to see an update. I adore this story, and this chapter was excellent. I love to see the interaction between Kasan and Max. I just hope Max learns the language faster so things can really become clear for them both.

The last part of the chapter was hilariously funny. I can just imagine the fight going on behind that door.

Thank you so much for the update. I'm glad you're feeling so much better.

Love this story, so glad to see an update after so long. I was wondering if another was coming. I love the two main characters in this. They just seem to fit together so well and it's not just the sex. It's nice. I can't wait until Max completely, or at least mostly, learns the language. And I can't think of much more. Gotta go get ready to go to class. Thrilled. I did have one question, might get shot down flat and bitched out (not saying that you'd be inclined to do it but it has happened so you never know), but I just really wanted to ask. Is there any chance of this story becoming an mpreg? Some affect of mating with a human and a mix with the nanites that they didn't know about.

You know I just realized I already asked. Shows you how good my memory is. I don't remember about an answer though and I have no idea which chap that was a review for so I could go back and look to see what the response was, if there was one.

Sorry, email for answer (forgot aff.net doesn't display them): Joyful51485@hotmail.com

I really like this fanfiction and I think your doing a wonderful job. My only problem with it is how long you make your paragraphs! Please break them up so they don't seem like such a chore to read and that they vary in length. Also, your characters seem to think to much and to long. This is not a criticism just a critique. Kasan and Max seem to go on pondering for like a whole five minutes when they should be paying attention to what's happening before them. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Lol, sorry, I forgot this is fiction not a fanfiction, anyway, your doing a good job, keep it up.

LOL, LOL, LOL (pause for gulps of air) LOL, LOL, LOL.

I love it. Please don´t take this long to update again.