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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Catmum56
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Of course, I read it too fast and now I have to wait for the next one. But this was great. I was wondering what would happen in the vid room. Completely destroyed it, eh? Sheesh! Destructive little guys, aren't they? And Androcles - Androcles?! Did he have a growth spurt? I love it - Monster Dog-thing.... At least he was useful in finally taking away the books and the crystal "wand" that were making Max so nervous. And now it's time for FirstMeal and the start of Kasan's Service...this is going to be fun.... It will be fascinating to see how Service is explained to Max and what he makes of it. Thank gods you're 25% through with Chpt. 17 already.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I missed several chapters... I love this story and can't wait to read them.. Thanks for sharing!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
time for service!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update, an update! I love this story, especially Zonta, although he isn't one of the main characters. I rarely come across stories so well written and despite the frequently occurring hardship being so funny. I almost bet Androcles had a growth spurt and there will be some serious shindig once he's discovered at Max's side.

I hope the elders won't punish Kasan yet again. I mean, they must realize what impact the whole event would have had on Max + Kasan is freshly mated and out of his mind - medically spoken. They absolutely aren't allowed to punish him for protecting his little Gisho's dignity. I wish for once Zonta could deal the punishment. He'd surely come up with something creative.

Before I forget, how about Leero? He must be out of his skin by now. Wasn't there a young palace guard, that desperately wanted to know how it would be being mated?

Thank you so much for sharing this! You certainly made my day.
person roro237
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I missed you:) I really love this story. I get so engulfed in each chapter. You give such good visual. (sounds hot huh?:) But really I feel like I can see them! This is my anime. Hope to read more soon. That was my no press plea ^_^
person Catmum56
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read through this about 5 times now. It keeps drawing me back with its captivating characters and storyline. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter and want to keep the story fresh in my mind for when the new update appears.
person tf
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see more of this... I had to reread a bit of the previous ch. but that was fun too; I'd like Max to not be so scared anymore, but I can see how it's still too soon; I didn't know about yesterday, but I'm glad it got us this update!
person P
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh! Lovely! More Androcles (I presume it WAS Androcles?) And the collar - priceless! Holding my breath for the next installment! 'Purr
person HannaFO
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if I would be called weird if i said those guards are cute?!
Great chapter... Glad your back :D *huggles*
person butterpie
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, poor Max feeling so small and helpless amid this world of giant aliens. Meanwhile Kasan has his "service" ahead of him, and he is so not looking forward to that test of his patience. Especially from his brothers who no doubt will savor being part of this spectacle for some time to come. You certainly made my day with another chapter in this rather compelling saga of yours. Thank you, and please continue to delight us all.