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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG sorry for leaving two reviews in a row but....I just read "Boredom And Kittens" by Jessjess and Holy Crap soooooo HOT!! This totally has to happen in the story. I've been thinking it for awhile but...that story made me say it. The two twins together...totally neccesary!!! Hot smex and a Hot Zonta getting pregnant. Very drool worthy.
person Mia
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey.
Just wanted to ask if I could be on the mailing list.
Love the story.
A little confusing at first.
But gradually understanding it more.
Very interesting.
But a little confused about the whole last pure human thing.
Didn't Max mention, well think to himself, about going back somewhere.
So doesn't that mean he's no the only human left?
person Meli Christophorous
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! i love this story, UPDATE! this is great! i keep catching myslf almost saying "poor max", but then c'mon the guy gets his own hot, sexy cat-man! it's been awhile since i laughed this hard over anything non-fanfiction and i love how well written this is. have you considered getting this in print and selling copies? i'd certainly buy, i know that. i can't help but love how endearing the family bonds are, and how well the sibling get along, even if they do prank on and beat on each other. and i want to know more about max and his past. i have a few theories but....well, yeah. i'm calling up my buddy-pal tomorrow that loves yaoi as much as i do and am forcing her to read! oh, the hilarity should always be passed on. please update sometime soon because i can't hardly wait. tell more about the whole sex-or-die thing because that's thrown me through a few loops, and more about what's happened to all the humans.....i know, i know, interbreeding. but why? what about the nanites? why the need for nanites? and how long would kasan's lifespan be? how will max's match up? what's joining? ah, my head is buzzing with questions and all kinds of gotta-knows. more chapters! MORE! ja ne. peace and love. Meli-chan.
person Leeana69
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously in love with this story. XDDDD
person Anita
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Throws confetti in the air*

50,000 hits!!!! Congratulations! *g*

*Throws around some more*

*looks at the mess she made*

Erm...I better get the vacuum cleaner out....*sigh*
person Josie
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I just want to state that you're killing me here, so if I die it's your fault - I've probably starved while waiting for an update...
Nah, seriously I understand it's hard to find time. Just wish you could feel all the mental energy going your way from my wishes, and put it to use ;)
This story is just wildly entertaining and I miss it. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Josie ~ 1more_sickpuppy on LJ
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read this elsewhere and was hugely happy to see that there were two new chapters I hadn't read. You've completely made my weekend on that score. Thank you for continuing with this and I hope that the Muses poke you good and hard to write more of this soon.
person wynja
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*lol* I started reading this as I waited for the next chap of "Nature's Choice", and I completely fell in love with this too! Damn you... I've done nothing but read your stories for days, it seems... ;o) I hope there is an update for both coming soon! Yes! I'm JUST THAT GREEDY! We readers can be a pain in the ass, huh?
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so rude; a few days ago, I read your latest chapter. I laughed so much and enjoyed that chapter that I did not take the time to leave a review. Bad manners on my part, it is like going to someone’s party eat all of their food and leave without so much as a thank you. Well, let me correct that, first I apologize.
Now, oh my goodness it was so cute, poor little Max so lost in this strange world. Fighting with himself over the fact that he finds Kasan irresistible, he likes having sex with him, he does not like having sex with him. Max is going to make himself crazy over it. I hope he learns to master the language soon, because I can see a lot of lover’s quarrel in the horizon. Oh and the make up sex …………. Ahhh be still my foolish heart. I just love how Kasan and his brothers are always fighting with each other, but its not like angry fighting. It is more like they are always trying to up one another, they do it out of love and the pure enjoyment of making a fool of the other, cute and oh so funny. I especially loved it when Max woke up to the Dong of Doom stalking him! I never laughed so hard, poor Max he cannot seem to get away from the mean looking toy. He is like a wanton little sex kitten one minute with Kasan and shy as a schoolgirl the next. Then the way he looked at Androcles, he was shocked to see how big it got. So funny and cute at the same time, and the dog understands him? How is that? Is he really a different kind of alien that after getting so big he will learn to speak? That would be a hoot. As always I look forward to more, I am so in love with your characters and cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update and thank you so much for a wonderful read.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, The GIRL guy. hahaha