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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! More cat people plotting against our beloved heroes!!!! The suspense is almost too much!

I love this story.
person kitty08
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great a new chapter!!! and what a twist in the story!!! a new spy...cool
person Anita
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New chapter and Merry Christmas!

The plot is thickening, with 'someone' after Kasan or after Max?? I like how this adds a whole new dimension to the story.

And Kasan's brothers are just like brothers should be *bg* So annoying the bunch of them!

Glad you updated and keep on writing...going to read the next chap of 'Uke' now ;)
person butterpie
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting family Kasan has there what with all of them so eager to tease the ever loving daylights out of him, with the exception of Zonta in front of Max. Max seems to understand enough to sense Kasan's unease, but not enough to fully consider all that his mate is facing in this punishment set down by his elders. Now as to others involved it seems as if Kasan's cousin Warren is up to his pretty neck in trying to oust his family's "throw back" heir, and his cousin's consort is more loyal than he appears to be given credit for by the rest of the family. I'm intrigued and can only wait to see what happens next. So by all means please continue when you're able. In the meantime enjoy the holidays!
person wynja
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! An update! I barely belived my eyes! Glad you are writing again! Angd the plot thickens! Seems scary, bad things are about to happen... can't wait to find out what!
person maloanne
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vow!!! that is cruel! Lol.
And I love this chapter, the whole storie for that matter.
I hope your problems are solved.
M
person tf
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This update was a great X-Mas gift! Max and Kassan are so cute... I want Max to learn more so he can communicate better; it sucks that another family member is a traitor... hope the family isn't hurt; thanks for the update!
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a christmas gift.. Thanks for the chapter...
person Laie
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy heck, what is gonna happen to Shoru?

And I hope learning more of their language will help Max feel less lonely, he had me a little worried!


Thank you so much for the update; I love this fic to death <3
person Laie
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy heck, what is gonna happen to Shoru?

And I hope learning more of their language will help Max feel less lonely, he had me a little worried!


Thank you so much for the update; I love this fic to death <3