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Yay! an update!!

Sorry I don't have anything beneficial to say...just wanted to let to you know that I'm extatic that you updated XD
~Miranda

PS. And I can't wait to see how the Kyashin react to Max being on good terms with Androcles (sp?) hehehe

Yeah! an update! i'm SO HAPPY!!!! I love this fic.

Glad to see more of this... it's good that Max likes Kasan so much and understands more and his theory about how he woke up way later makes sense; wonder who the bad guy was and happy Max's pet it seems took care of him; thanks for the update!

i just had a wicked idea. you should have one of the twins go into heat, maybe aosh, then with aosh being in heat, he can see that leero is in heat, and he and zonta confront leero about it. since aosh and zonta still share a room, they could maybe share the same mate/consort with leero in the middle, so aosh gets the gold crown, zonta gets the silver crown, and then leero gets both or something else not recorded. just thought i'd share that... i know. i'm a perv... :) i love it though!
ASOTA

When, when, when are you going to update this fucking brilliant story???? I can't wait to see what happens next. You are a genius! I hope you update soon. I think I've read this about 3 times now. There are so many unanswered questions...what is Androcles?...what was the one thing that Max couldn't understand from the translation pages...How long had Max been in cold sleep...What happend to earth? Can't wait to find out all this and more.

i have some suggestions or whatever you call it... since max is on a new planet, or whatever, shouldn't he get sick with a common virus or something that he doesn't have an immunity to, and when will max ever see any water? humans need water, both to drink and clean. i know that they clean with that oil cloth and stuff, but swimming and staring at water and fish is very relaxing. humans are drawn to water. just thought i'd make my thoughts known.
ASOTA

about my last comment: i know cats hate water, but there has to be a body of water somewhere...
ASOTA

Omg~ can't wait for the next chapter
been cheking this page every bay looking for update ^^
love your story and the pairing is just soo cute&sweet

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Hi!

I read this story on your internet site and I found it here today by accident. ;) I must say that I love it very much. XD I hope you'll find time to write the next part soon. *puppy eyes* It's getting more and more interesting. You got me curious and waiting for more. Now I'm wondering what will happen next. XD Will Max be in danger? Too bad Kasan ans the others prevented the Kyashin from recieving the news... I think they would be mostly interesting... and I'm still wondering how did Max end up in the hands of the slaves traders? And what happened to the other humans. Now that Max learns Hinta he and Kasan can talk abou it soon... or will he first talk about it with Zonta? I have so manny questions but I won't bother you with them. XD I will patiently wait to see what happens next. XDD
Thank you for writing this story!