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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person wynja
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit scareed about how insanely happy I get when you update... I'm not sure that's healthy... ;o) AAAANYYWAY loved the chapter, I really choked at the history-part it was so damn tragic! It left me wondering one thing, though; is the one that goes into heat always the one who tops (if male)? I'm SURE you have given the answer in the past chapters, but I just can't remember... I know answering questions here is kinda... not gonna happen, but if you should get the oportunity to point it out in the story again (for us slow-witted readers) it would be great... and pleeeeease update soon!
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!!!! What a wait....but totally worth it! OMG I love how Max is finally starting to realize that he's not just away from Earth but also in the future!!! What a shock that would be hmmmm. I'm glad though that he is starting to like and accept his attraction to Kasan. OMG I also love how they mentioned human sales....maybe it's the other people from his ship and they salvaged it...curious. And I never would've guessed that Kasan wasn't the owner of Androcels....XD....I mean wow....can't wait to see what happens when he meets him and Max has to step in to tell him that HE'S now the owner of his nice fluffy puppy!! lol!!! And I'm going to make a rare prediction here but I totally think that it was Androcels that ate that cat trying to break in....protecting his human friend hmmmm?? lol. Anywho....I wondered if you gave any consideration to my suggestion that there should be Mpreg due to the nanites and needing to race to survive with a very small population....also while needing to increase the population it doesn't make sense that they would pair with males...even human males...if they couldn't have kids with them....that would just fix their present problem of gene sharing but not the more widespread problem of decreased population. Just a suggestion (plus I'd REALLY love to see our cute little Maxy pregnant....lol....I don't think he'd take it so well at first ;)). Keep up the great work as I can't wait for more.
person Passing Reader
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can say anything that hasen't already been said, but I wanted to review anyway and show my support with the rest of the people.
I love Max's character and his reactions seem honest rather than forced. A very nice read that I would reccomend to anyone! Hers waiting for the next chapter, until then! ~Passing Reader
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! I love this story. You are my favorite fanfiction author. XD

I was wondering about Max's dog, I can't wait to find out Kasan's reaction to it.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this STORY. Final some history. Your worlds are always so complete. Love the mental image of Kasan in the collar. Think we need to give max some ribbon to play wit. *evil grin* I can't wait for more. thank for keep working on this story the chapters may not come out every other day but it's totally worth the wait.
person butterpie
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so this chapter explains why the Kyashin are genetically geared to mate or die. War creates nothing, but havoc as Kasan's people have learned the hard way. Maybe this will help Max as he continues to try and accept his new lifestyle and mate through a better awareness of his peoples plight. I can only wonder what's next as more of this story unfolds from your incredible imagination. Thank you, and by all means please continue with more!
person S. Tori
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG SO CUTE

I love that androcles is apparently scary. **giggles** it figures he'd befriend something that freaked out even the kyashin XD

awesome awesome awesome :D :D :D

If I were Max, my general assumption would be that I had been in stasis for too long and was in the future. Rip Van Winkle style.

Wheeee funfunfun....
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update!
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what was with the last scene? and how will kasan react to finding a 'dangerous animal' in his room? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! i need to read more soon!
ASOTA
person KYLEE
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am in heaven! I just got to chapter three and I just love this story. Thank you for writing it. I am a big Inuyasha fan too. I love cat people. This is the cutest funniest story I have read in a long time. I cannot wait to read the rest.