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Ooh, an extra bit of intrigue! And Leero seems to be having a hard time of it (pun intended) for a change... I have the feeling that we will be hearing more about Androcles too. I liked that 'dog'! All in all, another fascinating link in the chain you have been creating for us. 'Purr

Oh my Lord. I have just found you, brilliant author, stunning author, and I am deliriously happy. This story is fantastic! Unbelievable! I wish I had read Inuyasha so I could go and have a look at some of your other stuff, cause you are seriously wonderful. I find myself laughing quite a bit (once - and I swear this is true - I managed to spray my laptop screen with apple juice that had previoulsy been rather comfortable in my mouth). I love this to bits, and there is only one thing I would even consider possibly maybe thinking about suggesting to you to tweak ever-so-slightly: Max's inner-monologue's about how unbelievable everything is. I mean, it was really funny at first, cause you do it well (of course!), but after reading it a few times more in succeeding chapters it got a little tiresome. But still, maybe that's just because I'm reading this all in a one-er. I am intrigued by the mysterious new sub-plot that seems to be developing and I can't wait for more. If you have a mailing list would to send out update alerts could you please add me? mypheonixfire@hotmail.com If not, then I'll just have yp keep my eye out! Good luck with writing the next chapter!

~Kati-chan

Positively riveting! The characterizations and plot are absolutely amazing -- it's not often that I'm as interested in secondary characters as I am in the main ones! (Perhaps Leero will be able to get some action soon? lol) I can't wait for the next installment -- keep up the good work!

I cannot get enough of this fic. I discovered it two days ago and I swear I've read the whole thing through four or five times. You are my new favorite EVERYTHING. Please keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh, Man! I had started to despair that this was ever going to be updated! I love this story with a passion and can't wait to see where you take it. Update asap, yeah???

Wow. The history of the Kyashin was really... something. ;_____; *wants to hug 'em all* But now we have to wonder just how old Max really is. And what's a shokan doing running around Kasan's room like he owns the place, even getting rid of the Olympic-sized dildo? O__o;; Unless Androcles is only dangerous to the Kyashin, if that failed break-in is any indication....

Eeek! XD There's so much I wanna know! X3 It's what keeps me comin' back. ;3 *thumbs-up*

so happy! i've been waiting for an update to this forever! i love it! and thank you sooo, sooo, *sooo* much for the nanite explanation! i was so confused. but now, i have a bit firmer grasp on what's going on. i still *love* the whole leash-and-collar thing, damn that was pure brilliance. pure. brilliance. so really, how much time has passed between max leaving earth and max waking up to kasan? seems like a huge gap has occured. and i was a bit confused by the whole leero bit...he's after kasan's dad now? did i read that right, or did the whole thing sail smoothly over my head...? ah, well. it also seems like something is brewing beneath the surface that is seriously just going to ruin the whole kasan-getting-laid-thing. poor cat-man...good to see that max is warming up, though, however reluctantly... well, thank you for the update, and i hope for another one soon (cold meds-induced or no). and no worries. it wasn't too hard to figure out "yeah, max wouldn't quite get that" blessings toward a speedy recovery! ja ne. Meli-chan.

It's good the little one has a better comprehension of the Kyashin race at last. The last part of the chapter is really intriguing!

An excellent new chapter, awaited for so long! The plot development is intriguing, the background of policy, race history and space wars adds thrill to the beautiful depiction of Max's struggle with his emotions. Max is an interesting, believable character, not a damsel in distress or a know-all hero, but a vulnerable, emotional, young human, with a sound curiosity and a self-deprecating humour that makes one love him immediately. Thank you! Looking forward to new chapters sooner.

I am so happy that I decided to read this story. I love every single part of it. The writing is so well done. The smex is smoking hot! I think The Last Pure Human is the one of best stories on AFF. I loved the scene with Kasan and his brothers in the video room. I hope Max gets to order Kasan around some more - so funny. I can only imagine how Kasan will react when he discovers that Max has befriended a dangerous shokan. I wonder if poor Leero will last another night in the king's bed. I am loving all of it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us and keep up the good work. I am hooked for sure.