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YAY NEW CHAPTER!!!! And quite a good one at that!!! I can't wait til they all get to meet Max's pet Androcles lol!!!!! They'll prob. be scared shitless that that it's hurting Max and he'll have to stop them from hurting his pet!! And there will be small little, delacate Max standing guard over his huge pet so the Big Bad Cats can't harm him LMAO!!!! Keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon!!!

What a great chapter. I was on the edge of my seat one minute and then hot and bothered the next and then left totally worrying about Kasan. So many emotions in that chapter. Love that Max is getting totally possessive of Kasan. What a sexy scene. It was well written. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Max is cute!
My Kasan indeed! Lol!

Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon and happy Easter! ;p

Yay update!! I hope the next chapter includes more Andronocles drama--I've been wondering about that mutt for quite awhile. And those spiky blob things too. Anyway still love the story. Great chapter. Good to see Max molesting Kasan from time to time *snicker*

I'm glad they're planning a rescue; curious about what Kasan will find; thanks for the update!

Whoa Hilary, okay that last bit really brought out the "What's going ooon?!" feel.
Things had been more or less steady since chapter one, despite all the hectic, panic, confusion, smex, aliens, intelligence, absurdity, smex.... did I mention the hot eye boggling nosebleed inducing smex? *A* you type caramel drooling anti-coagulant madness, its beautiful~

besides the rather steady paced smooth flowing recent 18 chapters before, the tinge of madness is awakening!!! whooots!!! I can't wait to see how your words and imagination are going to portray a adrenaline rush induced by something other than... *cough* smex *grins*
The plot surely is taking a twist for the darker side, and it's a good thing to, your timing is quite nice, favorable ;)

What's to happen, to dear Max?! and what about Kasan and the rest of the Kyashin. Lord of the Hinta is probably in for a heart attack with all the backstabbing that seems to be going on. First his brother, now his cousin. Speaking of the cousin Waran; my heart aches for Shoru... Despite how he's currently being portrayed as someone mean (in Kasan's opinion), I don't believe a consort should ever be treated like that by his mate. Treated like he's just a hole meant to make use of during his heat.... I hate Waran already *glares* I hope he get's caught, eventually, and be tortured a long and painful torture.

Speaking of heat's... My eyes sparkle for Leero. Is the poor dude delusional? Is the king really, subtly hinting at Leero something? It would be nice if that dedicated lad get's hooked up with one of Kasan's available brothers... which one Zonta or Aosh.. hehehe It'd be interesting to watch should it be either one of them. xD
I just hope he confesses about it quickly, before his heat spikes and then he's left with little time to make a decision on his consort, or mate. or worse... what if he doesnt find either?! O_O Don't let leero die in such a stupid way! (Kasan nearly died that way *shivers*)

*ahem* I want to make some... asumptions, since you haven't stated the exact fact.
one. Max, is from the past... the very way way back past. time travel perhaps, with all that cyro-sleep. thing. and seeing as they have the same blue sky...
two. they're still on earth.... or not x_x another planet with atmosphere, or perhaps their technology is so advance, the purple sky from war is actually above the artificially or technologically constructed blue dome that surrounds the whole planet... whoaaaa dramatic man. but not exactly impossible with their tablets and stuff. strangely highly technologically advanced despite their 'caveman' appearences. xD

*sighs* I'm glad i finally caught up with your updating speed ^___^
Awaiting updates from great writers is something to look forward to ;)
The time I spent to far, marathon-ing your story has been wonderful, honestly, thank you for the reading material *hugs* And the humor you slot in! OMG! It got my laughing out suddenly in the middle of the night (then me soffucating myself to shuttup xD)

Thank you again Hilary! ^___^ I'll see ya again in the next update

All the best, I wish you speed!

- nekoii

Wow! This is a great story so far. I can't wait to read more,
Also I can't wait for Max to finally learn the hinta language and understand everyhting that's goin on.
More soon I hope.
Do you have an email update group? I would love to be emailed when you update if at all possible. =]

~B~

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two words for you.


ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!


I love it!!!! XDDDD
(Shall give a more constructive review some time later ;)

- nekoii

Please keep on writing. I can't wait to read more. I like the story and can't wait to find out what will happen when they see, the sinking dog Acca-- can't rember enough of the name to name it. It sonds as though it isn't safe to have. I can't wait to see what will happen. Happy writing.
Thanks.
Jade

Okay, I just totally found a published book that sounds, by the description, exactly like your story. Here's the link. What do you think?

http://www.fictionwise.com/eBooks/eBook83801.htm?cache