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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man talk about being lucky! Max nearly mauled and killed if not for Kasan and Zonta. Also how will they break the news about Max's people, and what has happened to them? The suspense of wondering what's next is keeping me all but glued to the edge of my seat as I await for news of more. This is my favorite read because you're the best at touching all the bases on what makes a story like this so pleasureful and addictive. So having said this please continue to write on!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great treat to come home and see your next chapter. It's like Chinese food, which I love alot LOL, but afterwards it just leaves me hunger for more. I'm glad to learn about the fate of Max's people, even as the rescue mission is underway. Max is so lucky that he has Kasan to cherish and protect him no matter what lays ahead. Keep up the good work!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Max has had it backwards this whole time. The pink blobs are friendly and the huge dog-things are deadly dangerous. XP I wonder how Max will feel when (if) Androcles is the one they're hunting for.
I'd say something more relevant, and maybe witty or humourous, but my brain's not working properly at the moment for such things to happen. XP Let me just say that 19 was a great chapter, as all the others have been. ^w^ *awaits the next update*
I'd say something more relevant, and maybe witty or humourous, but my brain's not working properly at the moment for such things to happen. XP Let me just say that 19 was a great chapter, as all the others have been. ^w^ *awaits the next update*
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! lol I threw my hands up in the air when I saw you had updated, but unfortunately I was in the public library so I got a few looks. I am very embarrassed. Anywho, this was great and a lot happened. I love the whole misunderstanding about the "shovak"/dogs. The shock value when what's really going on comes out is going to be priceless. And the "Tosa"? Are they the pink blobs? But Max thinks they are mean... Maybe they don't like humans? Sorry, just rambling here, but I really get overexcited when you update. :) Wonderful reading!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My heart stop beating for a second when I saw that you updated. Thank you.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So happy that you update !! This chapter is very exciting :P
There is a thing that I don't understand... Is Androcles a shokan ? Is it him that attack M and K in the garden ?
I hope they're going to find a way to rescue the other humans...
There is a thing that I don't understand... Is Androcles a shokan ? Is it him that attack M and K in the garden ?
I hope they're going to find a way to rescue the other humans...
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for update! I was pretty happy this morning. *grin* Poor Max, even if some things makes sense, it's still pretty confusing. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story that I only happened upon today. I am now completely addicted and will be checking for updates all the time. I love the fact that one moment I'll be laughing out loud at the misunderstandings between Kasan and Max, and the next be really moved by a situation. I think both main characters are easy to identify with and if I wasn't already married I would so be waiting for Zonta's heat to hit him!!!! Super - please keep updating!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! Androcles. D:
Awesome chapter, but now I'm sad. Poor weird Cat/Dog thing. :(
Awesome chapter, but now I'm sad. Poor weird Cat/Dog thing. :(