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Another wonderful update, and still as twisty and inventive as ever! (Takes off hat in admiration) 'Purr

love the story!! cant wait 4 the next update :P

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Popped by your site, and your profile. And read the free chapters for 'husbands for peace'

Anyway.

SHOKAN!
Correct me if I'm wrong... but... these SHOKAN... are in actual fact. Dog's. are they not?
It's the same creature that saved max from the huge pink blob earlier yes? The same creature that was small, then suddenly became huge. What did max call him again... some complicated name.
But anyway. ITS A DOG RIGHT?!

I can only imagine the looks on everyone's faces when they see the creature that they all fear cuddling up or licking max, and the both of them playing catch. or something.
Trust a bunch of overgrown cats with intelligence to overreact when a dog comes to visit and eat one of their pet pink slime balls. xD

switch chanel.
Max.
*smirks* that little darling has become much more daring. and I must say, I miss max's point of view style already, thou it's probably only in this chapter that we've not read it. I keep wondering what he might have been thinking when he practically molested Kasan infront of... everybody.
But man! those kyashin sure are sexual. for them to feel, comfortable, while their mate touches them and they get obviously aroused, while being looked on! voyeurism? hehe~


aaaaaaaaaaahhh well. despite the. seriousness of the current situation. I can't help but feel that everything will turn out fine.
I'm more looking forward to see what happens when Shokan, Max and Kyashin meet in the same room.

Besides, those other humans in the cat's world can't be max's immediate family (thou maybe he'd be relieved to see some of his own kind). They're probably those other space people.
I hope they have a translator on board. Somehow, reading Max speaking in child talk feels like an insult to his actual intelligence.

come one Zonta! Teach him more! ^____^
Imagine Kasan's face when MAx goes all intelligent on him xDDDD

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter ;)

- nekoii~

Um TH I know Androcles is a Shokan - but what the hell is a Tosa? The freaky pink blob?!?!

OMG, THIS IS SO LOVELY!!! LOVE THE PLOT, LOVE THE CHARACTERS, ESPECIALLY LOVE MAX!!! HE MAKES ME WANNA SQUEE LIKE MAD WHENEVER HE COMES INTO THE PICTURE. IF THERE EVER WAS A GUY AS SWEET AS HIM, I CAN'T IMAGINE HIM NOT HAVING LEGIONS OF ADMIRERS!!! HOT HOT HOT, SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!

but it isn't a shokan, is it? i don't think that max would be scared of them because of androcles. i hope that the pink blob doesn't get them though... is anyone ever going to see the shokan in kasan's room? can't wait for more!
ASOTA

(ch 19) So many great things in this chapter! I am happy the Kyashin are going to go after the humans. Will there be some mating in the future? Speaking of matings, poor Leero, he never got to tell the elders about his heat. I suppose he'll have more frustrating time spent in Kyoru's presence. I wonder how Kasan will break the news to Max. And Tosa? Are those the pink blobs? If so, I wonder why the "safe" blob went after Max and the "dangerous" shokan seemed to adopt him? I hope the Kyashin don't kill Androcles! And what of the cat that Androcles (at least I think it was him) killed in the last chapter? And then the scene with the ointment...squee! I admit to wanting some hurt/comfort smexing right then and there. I just can't get enough of this story! I'll be (patiently) waiting for more. Thanks so much for writing and sharing with us!

AH! Abso-freakin-lutely love this story! I have been waiting on the edge of my seat for this update and it was well worth it, but now I'm sad I have to wait for another update! Oh, I love Max'a burgeoning relationship with Kasan :) Soooo cute! ^_^ Keep up the good work! and write every second you're free!!!!!

Oh no!!!! If they kill Androcles, Max will be so upset. I am curious if it's just the one shokan, or is it all shokan that Max is not in danger from? And why does at least that one not put Max in danger? I really am wondering this...even more so than the "water issue" everyone else seems curious about. I love this fic and I have your page added to my favorites. I have thouroughly enjoyed reading all your fiction, and I look forward to the updates. Thank you for all your hard work, and keep it up. Thanks again. Please update soon!

Great chapter! Please don't let them hurt poor Androcles! Although, this does seem like an excellent opportunity for Max to keep the promise he made back in chapter 12..