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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is unbelievably amazing. I first read your Inuyasha fics and was suitably impressed with your writing style and the depth of emotion I was able to feel when reading them. Then I read this one....... Please for the love of Writing Gods, turn this into a book. I would buy it immediately and then buy more copies for my friends. This is by far one of the most amazing stories I have ever found on either AdultFanFiction, FanFiction, or MediaMiner. You are one heck of an amazing author.
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December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please finish the story it was just gettin to the part
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
XD i loved that chapter used the med's on the wrong part XD
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story this is my third time reading it but I hate the looooooooong language barrier.
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December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel nothing, but a roller coaster of emotions from this wonder story. Currently feeling frustrated with the language barrier and Kasan
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally got enough free time to read the new chapter leisurely and how cool that another one is following! Thank you so much for your hard work!
And this is also what I was waiting for: the return of Max, who was his usual hilarious self! Worm-Max cracked me up so much! But poor Max, I wouldn't have liked it either, particularly when Kasan wasn't very helpful... He really needs to learn to communicate better with Max!
How nice that Max thought about Androcles and Shoru too - I really hope we'll indeed learn more about him at some point because he seems like an interesting character and he could have a family with the poor child that was tortured by the fanatics...
I'm so happy about Zerard and Rui too! Of course it would have been better if they had mated under better circumstances, but at least they both chose their mate and people are helping them (Zonta is such a dear! But hopefully Zerard and Rui can soon have more intimacy...).
Frodi and his interactions with Kasan were interesting too - it's good that people know how to deal with Kasan's temper. And I forgot to mention it earlier, but the background info about how Kyashin treat females was very much appreciated and quite fascinating. It's truly amazing how they accept same-sex relationships in these circumstances, though. Some people in the real world could definitely learn from them...
I'll probably forget something but had to at least mention Max's feelings for Kasan - I really really hope they'll both be able to communicate their love for each other some day! Also, Kasan is always very over-protective and possessive of Max, so seeing Max be possessive of Kasan, for a change, was refreshing and extremely enjoyable! (that "Kasan mine!" made my day!)
And this is also what I was waiting for: the return of Max, who was his usual hilarious self! Worm-Max cracked me up so much! But poor Max, I wouldn't have liked it either, particularly when Kasan wasn't very helpful... He really needs to learn to communicate better with Max!
How nice that Max thought about Androcles and Shoru too - I really hope we'll indeed learn more about him at some point because he seems like an interesting character and he could have a family with the poor child that was tortured by the fanatics...
I'm so happy about Zerard and Rui too! Of course it would have been better if they had mated under better circumstances, but at least they both chose their mate and people are helping them (Zonta is such a dear! But hopefully Zerard and Rui can soon have more intimacy...).
Frodi and his interactions with Kasan were interesting too - it's good that people know how to deal with Kasan's temper. And I forgot to mention it earlier, but the background info about how Kyashin treat females was very much appreciated and quite fascinating. It's truly amazing how they accept same-sex relationships in these circumstances, though. Some people in the real world could definitely learn from them...
I'll probably forget something but had to at least mention Max's feelings for Kasan - I really really hope they'll both be able to communicate their love for each other some day! Also, Kasan is always very over-protective and possessive of Max, so seeing Max be possessive of Kasan, for a change, was refreshing and extremely enjoyable! (that "Kasan mine!" made my day!)
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
... On to the next chapter! (hurray for double updates!)
Well, finally the sex is here! Because you certainly like to tease us and weren't lying about the "lust" part in the previous chapter's title... The sex was very present in mind but not in effect. ;)
So, yay for hot sex scenes! I don't like it when sex is overly present in stories and overcomes the plot but you always manage to find a good balance and make us yearn for it (like the characters, really).
I must admit, though, that I'm hoping the misunderstanding about Max's hurt will come to an end in the next chapter, because this is becoming a tad too angsty for me and I just want Max and Kasan to be happy and all lovey-dovey together now, after all they have already gone through in such a short amount of time... Particularly because Kasan's misplaced guilt is now creating more pain for Max - the moral kind but also the physical kind, because who knows what side-effects this medicine could have if applied in the wrong places (besides the already occuring ones, of course)?! I hope that either Max or Frodi will knock some sense into Kasan, because I rather prefer confident Kasan over self-hating Kasan - and Max seems to share this opinion, doesn't he? He's already arrived in a fairly confusing world (from a human perspective), so does he really need any additional confusion from his over-protective alien husband?
In the near future I hope that Max and Zonta will continue to work on translating their languages for each species - and will force Kasan to take some lessons too! (it's only fair that Max doesn't do all the work for them both - plus, I kind of want to see Kasan get scolded by teacher-mode Max... :P)
Besides that I hope we'll see more of Kasan's family and what has happened with the Purists - and I'd love for Max to reunite with Androcles and Cleopatra again - and freak out Kasan (more out of jealousy than fear, though) and the other Kyashin in the process... :D
But whatever you decide will be sure to be a fantastic read anyway, so thank you again for your hard work on this story!
Well, finally the sex is here! Because you certainly like to tease us and weren't lying about the "lust" part in the previous chapter's title... The sex was very present in mind but not in effect. ;)
So, yay for hot sex scenes! I don't like it when sex is overly present in stories and overcomes the plot but you always manage to find a good balance and make us yearn for it (like the characters, really).
I must admit, though, that I'm hoping the misunderstanding about Max's hurt will come to an end in the next chapter, because this is becoming a tad too angsty for me and I just want Max and Kasan to be happy and all lovey-dovey together now, after all they have already gone through in such a short amount of time... Particularly because Kasan's misplaced guilt is now creating more pain for Max - the moral kind but also the physical kind, because who knows what side-effects this medicine could have if applied in the wrong places (besides the already occuring ones, of course)?! I hope that either Max or Frodi will knock some sense into Kasan, because I rather prefer confident Kasan over self-hating Kasan - and Max seems to share this opinion, doesn't he? He's already arrived in a fairly confusing world (from a human perspective), so does he really need any additional confusion from his over-protective alien husband?
In the near future I hope that Max and Zonta will continue to work on translating their languages for each species - and will force Kasan to take some lessons too! (it's only fair that Max doesn't do all the work for them both - plus, I kind of want to see Kasan get scolded by teacher-mode Max... :P)
Besides that I hope we'll see more of Kasan's family and what has happened with the Purists - and I'd love for Max to reunite with Androcles and Cleopatra again - and freak out Kasan (more out of jealousy than fear, though) and the other Kyashin in the process... :D
But whatever you decide will be sure to be a fantastic read anyway, so thank you again for your hard work on this story!
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December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, after reading this whole fic over again from beginning to end, I've realized I would like to read more about four things...1. More Rui x Zerard. 2. More Leero x Kyoru. 3. and 4. Zonta and Aosh in heat and who they would choose.
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December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story you have going here.. its entertaining, humorous and very well written. the character of Max is so adorable, especially in the begining! and i love how protective Kasan is.... plz update as soon as you can :)
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god. That was wonderful. Poor tortured Max, I love you so. I don't know how you do it, but your sex scenes in this story are some of the best I've ever read. Maybe it's all the confusion, miscommunication, and Max never knowing how to cope with what he's feeling- all of which is thoroughly described. Love it! Thank you for updating this story so much. I also can't wait for some more of the plot- the arrival of the other humans, finding out Max doesn't have any living family, figuring out how to work the ancient technology that the natives can't work, whatever fight is coming up that you keep alluding to, all of it! And more Kasan/Max melting-sex. Yum. Thanks!