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So close and yet so far... T_T

This was a great chapter though, and it seemed like that was the fastest update ever. So Max's pet is not exactly a pet but some kind of love interest. O_0 Well my mind went straight to the gutter... maybe I am reading to much into this. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD

ooooh man this last chapter... every moment I expected Kasan to come in and find max with Androcles!!!
I cant wait for Kasan's reaction1

Max: "but he's a dog! on my planet these are normal household pets! not like those weird pink blobs im so scared of!"

wow! amazing! i'm so happy i read this!!!! please post more soon! 68k views isn't enough lol~ i love how you add the stories about the guards and siblings too. It's not all about kasan and max. Oh god please let Leero end up with kasan's dad! Totally hot! yay for collared kitty Leero! drewl

Great chapter. I'm getting a strange feeling, and maybe it's because I'm just a die-hard pervert, but was Androcles sniffing Max out as his mate? It seemed that way, a little... Hmmm... I really, really wanted Kasan to find Max with his arm being "chewed off" by the Big Bad Shokan, and for him to go all crazy and stuff, but then Max would protect his doggie and the Kyashin would be all confused and shit, and someone would have to explain that dogs are Man's Best Friend... Or something. Yeah, something dramatic. I'm looking forward to the drama. :) Anywho, I thought the whole stomach-kissing thing was really sweet, and I liked the little bit about Aosh worrying about Zonta - cute! Thank you for the surpsisingly quick update, that perked up my day a little. Only criticism I have (because I'm trying to give you a rounded review) is that you worked really hard to create all this tension in the final section of the chapter, building it up and up until we're just dying to know what happens next, but then -instead of a huge climax, or a sudden drop- the suspense and excitement all kinda just, drains away, leaks away, and nothing happens. I dunno, I think maybe you coulda done more there, or at least had a bit of a cliffie or something. Anywho, that's my criticising all done now. (Phew!) :)

~Kati-chan

EEEE I can't believe I hadn't seen that a new chapter was up!

Awww, I can't wait to see them going out... and then coming back to see Max cuddling with the shoukan, or something **cackle**

Oooooo I do wonder how Max's expedition thingie fits into all of this -- were they all frozen and kept? Is he some sort of exact copy - complete with memories -- of some remains someone had of the original Max?

I want to know :D

More than that though -- love the dynamic between -- well, everyone. As always <3

OMG that's so cute and sad at the same time. Of course the Shoukan is trying to protect him from the cats -- I mean, to a Shoukan, the cats are KILLERS.

I want Kasaan to smell him and realize that Androcles was there. I SO DO.

I love Androcles. Pleaaaase don't kill him ;_;

In the meantime -- eee happy times ftw :>

Hey, thank God you wrote another one, and wowsers left us dying for more! Androcules is the Shokan isn't he, and Kasan is gonna have a fit when he finds him near Max ain't he? Oh I hope to see more from you soon, after all this tale of yours just rocks us all to bits. So please continue, I'm begging you, kay?

Another brilliant chapter. I just have to say, I can't wait for the coming scene where Kasan discovers that Max has taken a Shokan for a pet. I anticipate some hilarity.

wonderful story. I like it and I like "husbands for peace" too.
you are so great writer

I like Androcles so much! XDD I hope Max can save him from Kasan when he finds out about Androcles' hideout. XDD I can't wait for the next chapter. :)