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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person skyblue100
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You're an amazing writer.
person miles
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 21

Sweet, sweet torture ^^
Another good and hot chapter.
Kashan's feeling toward Max are intoxicating...
person mashael
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
* been cheking your page sinse your last update *
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story :) but right now the 'I have finished so and so many percent of chapter x' on your profile is driving me crazy... *is checking the story at least once a day for updates*
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I just started reading this story yesterday and already hooked! Can't wait for updates!!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Kasan and Max make such an amusing couple! I love the conflict between them. xD I like how you gave background information too because usually I just read and point out loopholes or flaws in plot--I'm just analytical like that. lol I can't wait until your next update. :)
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh me oh my~ oh dearie.
What's to happen now, now that a shokan is after max as a mate... it's bad enough that kasan is of a race that hates the shokans... now they're gonna be competitors of love?
Naaaaaaaaaaahh~
No way unless all seven heavens burn down that max will leave kasan for the shokan. androlecus or smthing... goodness he has the most complicated name around there.

and anyway... there is max, waiting for kasan to return. while on the bed looking all ready for some more smexy action~ ^_________^ oh boy oh boy.
will there be a venture for new positions? *A*
Do tell and show~

Awaiting your next update!

- nekoii
person NightRoseFox
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So does this mean that Kassan's gonna get to meet Max's rather dangerous pet. I figured it probably thought of Max as a child, but now I'm wondering if he thinks that Max might be mate material. I wonder how Kassan's going to take this. Can't wait to see your next chapter. And would love to see another chapter to Husbands for Peace as well, hint hint......


Aki
person mashael
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i couldn't stop smiling the whole chapter
I looooove Androcles. please don't kill him!!
I want Kasaan to smell him and realize that Androcles was there.
HE's going to hit the roof
can't wait for the next update!!!
Thank you, your story made my YEAR ^_^
person Kuromei
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What's Max going to do when Kasan figures out his "dog" is a shokan? What's Androcles going to do when Kasan finally catches him in the same room as Max?? XP Yeesh, this on top of another assassination plot and Max possibly being from who-knows how many decades in the past, this is one interesting story you've got here.

Of course, I knew that from the get-go. ;3 It's why I'm still here! XD *hugs*