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No italics is fine. I'm just glad you updated!

Poor Max, he still doesn't understand what's going on.

Awesome chapter as usual!

They are so sweet! And sexy, too. That was worth waiting for, thanks. :)

Wow that chapter was HOT! I love Kasan he's so evil. *grin* You keep teasing us with whole Andronocles situation. Is there going to be a confrontation of some sort between him and Kasan--like maybe when our kitty sex-god see's the mutt absconding with his mate? Anyway, Great story!! Love it. can't wait for more

This could have been titled, "Service with a Smile", as Max finally learned to accept his need for Kasan by being in charge for a day, even in the bedroom although it was more like a seduction on Kasan's part. Anywho more sex is always good no matter who is in charge. The mysteries about Max's people and the conspiracies surrounding Kasan's continue to mount as you add more layers to this wonderous tale of yours. Loving it more and more all the time. Please feel better soon, and of course please continue to rock on xD!!!

That was wonderful! It was sweet and sexy at the same time. I love how close they're getting, and I love that Kasan is head-over-heels0no-going-back in love with Max. It's lovely. Again, the only thing I would change is Max's long debates with himself. I've said that before though, so I won't go on. It is a tiny imperfection, but still, a rounded review is best and I aint got nothing else to criticise. :) This is without doubt my favourite story. You are a genius! I can't wait to find out more about the whole shokan thing. And I was wondering - y'know humans are always comparing really bad singers to screeching cats, well are the Kyashin bad singers? Cause if they are, then I think it would be quite cute if some people (guards, the princes, or Kasan, whatever) overheard Max singing to himself. I mean, Max wouldn't even to have to be a fabulous singer by our standards to impress screeching cats, right? That would be cool. And where is all the water? I think it would be funny if Max jumped into a body of water for some reason (maybe someone's drowning, maybe he's dropped something in there, I dunno) and for everyone to be like "OHMYGOD! Humans are so fragile, he's, like, a gonner!" and then for Max to be totally fine and like, "Wassup guys?". Yeah, I'm so articulate. But you know what I mean. It would be cool to see some human strengths working to Max's advantage. :) Anyway. Thank you for the update (I check every time I visit this site to see if you've updated - so sad) and I hope to see the next chapter soon.

~Kati-chan (who can't be bothered to log in)

Wow that was totally HOT!!!!!!!! I really hope they get this understanding problem over with soon it is really irritating!!!! And I also hope Max will accept that he loves Kasan!!!! And that the sex is necessary!!!! But well it was interesting to have Max in control!!! i really liked how Kasan thanked him in the end soooo cute!!!!!!!!! Anyway thank you soo much for the update cause it's been a while!!!!! Hope to see the next chappie up soon!!!! See you!!!!!
P.S. I really love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*nosebleed,faints,wakes up hours later,read it,then faints again*...i Love it! <3

Omg loved the chapter, well worth the wait!!! cant wait 4 the next :P

That was excellent, as usual. XD

Random question - Is there going to be mpreg in this story? I didn't think there was but I found this story included on an mpreg Archive. Not that I would mind it but its not in your warnings, so I just wanted to be sure.

Anyways, I can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^