rate_review Reviews

Ohh, I have to say, I'm not normally a fan of slash, but this is easily one of the best stories I have ever read! It's cute and sexy and hilarious and just awesome, all in one exquisitely written package. Your writing is.. just.. I'm speechless. Honestly. You must write more! I beg of you! I'll give you cookies and cuddles if you do. ^.^

Brilliant, as always <3

(I'm still dying for Kasan to figure out that Androclese is Actually Max's FRIEND.... 'Cause that makes Max super hardcore. Well, except for the part where Max is terrified of pink herbivore blobs.)

I love their miscommunications -- Kasaan's protectiveness, Max's indignation and confusion -- and also, I'm fascinated by the plot that you keep pushing into the chapters (I mean, other than the romance-plot) -- this time, about the mysteriously lasered guy.

Do the nanites keep Max cleanshaven? Is it due to a dietary change? One can only wonder.

Also, just -- thanks for writing :)

I made a long review, and it looks like the thing ate it, which is making me cry on the inside.
To make a long story short:
-I love their epic miscommunications/learning to communicate
-I love how Kasaan is fiercely protective and possessive
-I love that Max is indignant and confused and still so very into Kasaan
-I love that Androclese is friends with Max, and I'm DYING for Kasaan to find out that his little Maxiepoo is friends with a terrorizing fuzzball
-I love that Androclese makes Max automatically hardcore because he is apparently some sort of killer puppy Stitch thing
-I love that Max is sort of unhardcore after all, since apparently his greatest fear is still a pink blobbity herbivore
-I love the bits of plot you manage to get in, even in the more smexy-oriented chapters; in this one, the bit about the lasered guy
-I am curious as to why Max isn't growing facial hair. Is it his diet? The nanites?
-I am bloody tired and ending this review now but want you to know that this was awesome, as ever :)

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Oh. My. God. That was hot!!! I almost couldn't finish the chapter it was so freaking hot! XD *fans herself* Is it hot in here? I think it is...

........ Excuse me. *gives two thumbs-up, then runs to her room*

*massive ginormous nosebleed* whoo, that was hot, hot, hot! Love it, and I'm looking forward to the newer chapters and stories soon!

I LOVE this story and I can't wait for more! Thank you for your wonderful writing.

oooooh gods that was hawt!!!!

tho im worried about if the guard will find Androcles back in Kasan room or not... i thought for sure Max was gonna tell Kasan about him at the end of the last chapter...

Okay, I'm confused (and tickled). Androcles is a Shokan. Up until chp 21 I thought Androcles was Kasan's shokan although I thought it was a little weird that Androcles was never around when Kasan was around. But now I'm confused and I think you confused us deliberately and very cleverly. I don't know what a Tosa is and I don't know what the pink blobs are called but all Kasan seems worried about is Shokan. . . . I'm beginning to think Kasan doesn't own a Shokan. :P

Twisted...I love this story!!!!! Kasan and Max are just too cute together!!!!

Please update again soon!!!!

Bloody Hell! That's the sort of foreign language lesson I'd like to have. Jeezus. That was very sweet and sexy. And it's amazing how you always seem to leave me puzzling over one tiny little nugget of information...this time...why is Max NOT growing facial hair? Thanks for the update. I really really can't wait to see what comes next. As badly as I want to read more of this story, I also never want it to end. Thanks once again for your very hard and brilliant work!