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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Jumps up and down and hugs the life out of you* Update!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't be more happy that you finally updated, and I think it was well worth the wait! I have to say that I did have to backtrack a little to remember what was going on in the story, but that's fine. Just THANK YOU for updating! Also, in all seriousness, though I don't know what's going on with you medically, I just want to say that I hope everything works out and that you're back into top shape soon.
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! The chapter was shorter than you normally write but had lots of information about other things going on. Man, the King is has a cruel side to him. Doesn't he? I can see where his son's get it from. Well not cruel like kick little kittens cruel but his interaction with Leero was . . . well . . . just so damn funny. There was a couple of times I was sitting here laughing going "slam". That has to be the most embarrassing thing, humping the King's leg! If Leero waits to long the King is going to have a new Queen if he wants one or not lol. Specially when he has his claws dug into the mattrass so he doesn't get pulled away. My sister had a small dog that was the same way with an overly large couch pillow. So we know it's Max they are after then? So they gave Max to Kaasan to prove he really was a human and now have their own plans for him? Gee poor Max, everyone has plans for him. The Nineran (sp?) got plans to use him to prove they have real humans for slave sales, the bad Kasharin (sp?) want him to try & find the pure them? But hey, if what Max was saying is right and all the cat folks are cat folks mixed with humans & the nanites that has caused them to change then wouldn't the throw backs be more pure then them? I mean their old kind all had ears, tails, claws, & body hair right? Wanting a pure race? Hmm, seems more of human history has made it to this planet or maybe it's universal? Fighting till you kill everyone almost & the idea of a pure race. As often as Max & Kaasan need sex wouldn't it just kill him if they take him away from Kaasan or is it only Kaasan who needs Max? Well can't wait to see what you got planned & shot I was hoping it was Waren that the shovack got not someone else. I hope Max can protect his puppy! Thanks for sharing the story & the new chapter, so glad you are feeling better & hope the family is flu free!

Take care
littleolmee
person kylee123
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happiness! Too busy dancing around the room to actually read the chapter. :-)
person Coobs
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
soo glad u updated :P loved the chapter cant wait 4 more!!
person Loves to laugh
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back even though I missed you I hope that you are better health wise.
I have enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to more, even if you have added more suspense with the the planned kidnapping of Max.
And you have to love Leero humping the King's leg, it had me laughing like crazy, I like to see were this goes.
person tf
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So happy for the update... Max is definitely coming around but I'll be glad when he and Kasan can talk more... worried about the bad guys taking Max but hoping for the best; look forward to more!s
person kylee123
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back and thanks for the new chapter. I hope you are doing okay healthwise. It sounds like poor Max might be the victim of a kidnapping. I hope his secret weapon Androcles will help him out there. I chuckle to myself everytime I remember that Androcles is holed up right inside Kasan's room. He is like an outlaw puppy on the run! The tension between Leero and the Lord King is killing me. I don't know how they made it out of that bedroom after the leg humping incident. I hope Leero and the King get some action soon. They deserve it! Max and Kasan are so hot together. Especially the way Max is becoming more aware of his own need for Kasan. I loved the tail grabbing scene. I loved everthing! I am looking forward to the next chapter. Take care until then.
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woooooot ch 22... an update! (im glad you are feelin better)

when is max gonna reveal Androcles as the loyal puppy.. to Max... that he is to Kasan!?!
person Leelyn
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story, It looks really fun so far. I'm going to reading when i get time. :)
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If this story were a person, I would marry it and move into a little cottage with it and get a little pet cat-like creature with it forever and ever and ever. This story is highly addictive, as I found out spending a sleepless night unable to stop reading until I ran out of story. I hope you continue to update! Please keep up the great work!

~Chickalupe