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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I read your Inuyasha story, Uke, and love it. Someone recommend this original, so i decided to read it. I HAVE NOT SHUT MY LAPTOP DOWN FOR 2 DAYS!! LOL. It makes me smile, and I LOVE that. I'm still getting things together, but that's alright. I love Leero and the other guards, they're so silly. I'm eagerly awaiting your next update.
-Shea
person Reymond
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for your stories, and, above all, thank you for keeping writing !!! Concussions, illness, ill computers, arghhh !!! Good luck ! I wish you a better health and some good time ... to write in peace. BECAUSE your stories are wonderful, hilarious, unbelievable and such treats to savour ! I love Death or Little Death, that is the Question, AND Uke (please, oh please, update it !!!) ; and now, I have to say, I love The last pure human a lot (and how long exactly is Kasan's cock ???). You have a good plot and Leero is going to suffer a lot, poor boy hee cat !

Am waiting with shark's eyes the next update,

A french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France et Joyeux Noël !!

Merely Truth
person MiraMira
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! *happy happy* Thanks so much! I loved it (of course). I can't wait until they find out Max and the overgrown pup get along. I hope it's a cute encounter and not one where the pup ends up hurt too badly O_O Y_Y

Anyways, thanks again for giving us the next chapter
Hope you feel better *hugs*
Miranda
person Rose
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DaniWyntr
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww yay!!! I've been reading this story over and over waiting for an update, and I was really excited to see a new chapter. I'll be impatiently waiting for the next, but you'll always have a fan in me! please update asap, and feel better!
person BabyVampy
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! My! Gosh! I just by chance happened to check on this (check it twice a week) and here was this NIFTY update! Thank you Thank you!!! You made my night!!!
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Splendid! Simply splendid! I was looking for a story to read (as I always do) and I had almost reached 30 pages back when I stumbled over this pretty thing! I have to admit I got hooked up pretty easily and with the speed I was reading those long chapters I felt horrible knowing they'd end pretty soon! And then just when I'm close to finishing what's up you update. And from what I understand from you it's been some time since you last did. So I prefer to take this as a Godly sign that you'll be updating very often from now on just for my piece of mind! ^_^

It really is a splendid story. I love it how you twisted the whole time thing and now you're plotting something delicious with the slave-traders and this Warren guy. I also find myself very attached to Androcles. It's very peculiar why he is acting the way he is with Max alone while everyone else seems to think of him as a pure monster. He hadn't chosen him for a mate, has he? Because it would be hilarious to see Kasan's face if he new that XD You're also very good at writing comedy. I laughed my ass off with Leero and the pee accident! But I believe your forte is the smex. If you had written that last sex scene in another language I'm positive I would have remembered all the crucial words for life. What was it - feet, calves, knees, tights ... ~.^

So, please do keep writing. You both have the talent for it and a delicious idea here with this story. I'll be back very soon to check for an update. May the Kyushin force be with you ^^
person mashael
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! YOU ARE BACK!!
Love you !!
person Chibko
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So.. Leero and the king, y/n? I hope it's yes... XD

I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Waran fails at getting rid of Kasan and Max... because that just ain't right.
person Tatiana
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really happy that you're finally back! I'm pretty sure I checked everyday for months.

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