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Hey, I've been reading for a while now, not yet caught up to the most recent yet, but I'm fast approaching! I have every intention of finishing, and I'm just DYING to read more! I hope to see more soon, I really do! This story cheers me up so much, and I'm only just past Max learning Hinta... ^_^ Lovely mood, tempo, setting, details are exquisite, and I find myself laughing and blushing so hard with no way to explain it XD

This is a great story - I just dropped by to say that I saw Avatar last night and The People reminded me so much of Kasan and the Kyashin, they were a little like how I'd imagine the Kyashin (except blue, obviously). Brilliant update, I love Gisho and his confusion!

I really enjoyed this fic so far. Very hot. :)

I'm pretty sure you just made my life by updating this story-might have had a small seizure actually- It is incredibly tedious and exhaustingly difficult to find a good orig. slash story these days. I was actually about to give up and turn back to searching through naruto/potter fics to find something moderately interesting whe I came across this story. One question though, this was listed on the mpreg archive-is it actually mpreg or just slash? Anywho keep up the wonderful work, your story is so creative and inspiring! I actually attempted to start writing a story of my own after reading it till I came to the realization that I should leave it to people who actually have some talent XD

Areh~~~

I'm feeling like Max now... lost.
more like... confused...

Okay. the thing about the mark (aka tattoo) is... it can only appear when the nanites are nowhere near. yes?
so that means. when they are feeling horny, or "in need", or just finnished getting laid. The mark wont be there.

In other words. Max and Kasan have never seen / met / talked to each other, other than the times when half their brain is on sex.

and that is. "Romantic" ? eeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrr? odd logic these kyashin have.

hhe hehehehhee. ACK!

SOMEONES GONNA KIDNAP MAX!!!

is that even gonna be POSSIBLE?

hello? this is PRINCE kasan's new consort! he's definately gonna be heavily guarded yea? what with the bloobs on the loose.
Kidnapping him aint gonna be easy eh~
EH?!

Eeeeeeehh????

argh... well..

we'll only know in an update.
so please... UPDATE TLPH~!

and actually. I'm really interested in your "husbands for peace" story... I guess I gotta wait till I can get a paypal account or something > __ < gyaaah!


but till then.

Wishing you the BEST OF HEALTH! goodness. what is wrong with the people I know (sorta know) lately. they are all falling sick or dissapearing!

TAKE CARE! the weather lately is sooo crazy, gotta take even more care of yourself. okay!

I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update!

- nekoii

I had to reread it; the first time I read the new chapter, I didn't see the plotting Dx oh no! max and kasan. So does this mean Androcles is in on the plot? I figured he must be the shokan, right? I thought he'd gone bad, killing people...But he's good, right?

lol maybe I need to read it again. I get myself so confused.

I found this story on a recommended reading and when I started reading I was surprised to remember starting to read this story a long time ago. But I stopped for some reason, I think I lost the link. And I kept reading and am soooo glad I did. This story is amazing. Max is adorable and Kasan is just awesome.

Woo hoo! XD Update! *does a dance* With major plot advancement, too! X3 *dies from happiness*

*returns to life* OMG I missed this so much. ;w; Max's POV is always so funny. And I missed big, horny Kasan, too. X3 Though I wonder what he and his family were arguing about...

Even if I have to wait another three months to find out, I don't mind. As long as I know you're still writing, that's enough for me. ^w^ I hope you get to feeling better soon! =D

Yeah! another great chapter. Poor Max - kind of has a one track mind right now huh? Danger lurking - Kasan would go ballistic if anything happened to max (& not just because of the (no sex, kasan dies rule) Wonder why the shokan is so attached to Max , explanation later maybe? It's funny though, Max makes a pet of the thing and Kasan would have a freakin heart attack if he knew. LOL. Excellent writing As always, I look forward to more updateds. Hope you feel better soon.

I really like this story, I read all the chapters in 2 days :D
cant wait till mroe come out!