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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh god. i feel so bad for the rest of the humans. what they must be going through... :( if anything like that ever happened to me, i would probably react so badly that i actually kill myself - if anyone could actually do that. please save them soon. i hope they find the ship. maybe that will have a roster of some kind with maybe pictures... you never know.
ASOTA
person midnighteyes
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm always glad to see an update!! I've been following this story at the very start and you always have me wanting more.. thank you so much for sharing your story..
person Reymond
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as allways ! The suspense is killing me.... I'm very glad you updated. What would be better ? A new chapter for Uke !!:)!! Please ?
Thank you for you fabulously hilarious stories and your subtility !

A french reader,
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth
person Night_Rose_fox
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While I am extreamly happy that you updated, I want more. It seemed like a rather short chapter, and that not much went on in all together. I was slightly disapointed. I guess I'm used to more going on, like in your other chapters. At any rate, I am happy that you updated, and I seriously just want to squeeze and snuggle Max until he can't breathe. I think he gets cuter every time I read a new chapter. I can practicly see him with a cute little scowl on his face glaring at elder cat. And he has the best intuition. He knows better then to trust Warren, which is good. All around I was just happy to have Max and Kassan back to business, and running through the story, like good little boys. Now if only they could do it on a more regular basis, like Noah and Jovi. All well I can wait for them longer then Noah and Jovi as they were my first loves, and I am a loyal fangirl. Untill next time........snuggle the boys extra hard for me and tell them to hurry back.......ja-ne.



~~ Aki
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I'm only on chapter 8 but I just HAD to stop and let you know how much I'm enjoying this (besides it's past time for me to go to bed.) You are doing a WONDERFUL job with this. For once, something that someone told was funny has been (although I didn't giggle out loud until the end of chapter 8). I look forward to reading the rest of this, it should be something wonderful.
person s. tori
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not gonna lie, I'm really hoping that it is revealed soon to everyone that ickle Max is a shoukan tamer :)
Maybe Kasan will smell Androcles on him?

WHEEEE ANYWAY LOVED THIS CHAPTER AS USUAL <33
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AArrrggghhh! Now I've caught up and I have to start waiting! I'm counting on the Shouta to save him! Love the story, love the pairings, love the father. Can't wait to see if the rest of your stories are as good, although its hard to believe they could be. :)
person Chibko
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Max.. When will you realize that your "pet" isn't a pet at all? Daaanger!!

I think I'm seeing hints of something.. hoping it turns out to be a correct assumption. :D
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and am so glad I did. You could seriously publish this story I read a lot of AFF stories and a lot of published m/m stories and I wouldn't think that many AFF stories could be published, although I like them well and all, but this is one of the best stories I've read. I'm just sorry I have to wait for the next chapter now.
person butterpie
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wowsers Max's instincts are so true about Warren. This is one seriously bad dude! Kasan better get back to him pronto as even the Shorkan is not around to protect him now. Anywho I hope to hear more about the rest of the humans soon. Max is really starting to finally accept his relationship with Kasan so that's all good. Please continue soon-kay?

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