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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're going to put Leero with the King! Whee! I love Max and Kassan, but I also like poor Leero. Especially after Max pissed on him:p Also glad to hear you're feeling better. Great job, and thank you for this wonderful story.
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Baths!!! Aw Max is too cute. Warren is up to no good, I know it. Max needs to trust his instincts. Too bad he can't communicate those feelings. More, please?
person jdbbrz27
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very neat I can't wait until the bath scene that should be hot and amusing I'm sure your very good at keeping this story interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for updatin and I'll be waiting for the next one.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh... my. ^^ This should be... interesting...

XD

Can't wait for the next chapter. And since I also can't remember if I've reviewed this before or not, suffice it to say that I simply adore this fic and you deserve lots and lots of chocolates for writing it. d(^_^)b

person Babisko
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really really love your story!

also, noticed you saying something about trouble with italics, heres a link, if you want to look at it,
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?s=a92ce3cad1466d970eba356eb95651c5&showtopic=3724
hope i helped!
person roro237
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm looking as forward to bath as Kasan is:) WoW! ^_^
person js
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol...I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Kuromei
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was so surprised to see two updates I missed. X3 Yay~! XD You just about killed me at the end of chapter 23, where Waran was standing guard. XP Can you say "easy pickings?"

But OMG a sexy springwater bath~! XD *squeak!* I can't wait! ^/////////^

See you next time. =3
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story and really like the size difference. XD Makes for perverted imaginary.

On the other hand, Max is really weak, and because he can't even speak the language properly, which makes him extremely vulnerable. It kind of makes me think that Kasan is playing with a doll, rather than having a well-developed love-relationship with another intelligent being. I hope that with time, their 'Catboy x Toy' vibe will slowly but surely transform into an equal love-relationship in the future.

PS: Max is really a perv and totally gay, even if he constantly denies it and puts the blame on Kasan. XD And Kasan's head is really up in the clouds, his ideas of him and his little Gisho are totally distorted, lol!
person Jeezabel
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just started reading chapter 11 and I wanna just say its been good so far, I love your writing! I also have a question, how old is Max?