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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person maloanne
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter!
Bye
M
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
: D I really love this story! Its so cute! I'm so excited to see the baths! X3
person Coobs
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
im loving the quicker updates, and loving the story!!!! :P
person mashael
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG !! SO cute&evil lol ^^
person Butterbutt
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How do I love thee, I can't even count the ways. They are innumerable. *big sloppy kiss*
person butterpie
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another nice one, and something especially nice to find when the workday is done. TGIF! I will be imaging what they get upto inside the baths-oh man! Anywho please continue with more. On another note I hope Max gets Kasan to understand how he feels about his cousin Warren-the creep!
person kylee123
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet update. This last chapter made me so happy! There is nothing as fun as watching Max and Kasan have one of their hilarious conversations. Kasan is so endearing with his enthusiasm for his mate. Max is getting easier to persuade since he agreed to baths and sex right away! I can't wait to see all the fun things they do at the baths. I hope the King and Leero get a little closer soon too. Thanks for updating so fast too.
person miles
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update ! The bath's going to be hot ;)
person Djargo
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I absolutely adore your writing. No one does sexy,humorous,conflicted characters like you. This story is top quality. It has everything a great story needs. Drama,intrigue,humor,romance;it's all there. I just want to thank you for the time and effort you put into your work. I also thank you that you generously and freely share your writings with us, your readers^_^.

I hope that Max learns more Hinta soon. He going to need it to communicate how much he hates being a "kept" man. He wants to earn his way so bad but Kasan is having a hard time letting go his image of a completely helpless Max. Poor, Kasan. He thinks if Max doesn't need him to protect him he'll lose Max's interest,as if. I can hardly wait to learn the difference between a Kyashin bath and a human bath. Must be a helluva one since Kasan actually ran to get to the baths^o^.

That little look between Waran and Quim is worrisome. Are they partners in treason? Got me worried to what they have in store for Max, Kasan, and the rest of the family. I'll anxiously await your next update.
person Chibko
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man Kasan, if only you knew about Waran! And Androcles is getting creepier. Not a pet Max!!