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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Give me new chapter soon! And MPREG! Max needs to be impregnated by Kasan.

The words, flow, plot are good. I'm edgier by the day you are not posting the next chapter.
person Bunnybop05
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
imao max gets pregger I lol...
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update this great story I'm left on the floor with laughter I hope they find the rest of the humans and I want kids there is no one preggie and will the king get together with leelo and will his brother the one twin that wants to mate with a human get a human what's up with waren too come on update twist I would love to know the answer to these questions lol.
person Le_Lethe
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. They are so cute together!!! and props for Max growing a big ol' pair and admitting wanting to have sex. Oh, and that running scene? So sweet! but Waran is disturbing me. Kasan needs to pick it up and keep a better eye on Max
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Just what's the big deal about taking a bath?! Jeez!

and was Waran and Quim scheming something??? I bet they were! I bet they were planning to kidnap Max that day!
THANK GOD KASAN CAME!!!

next chappie... baths! =D

- nekoii
person yFangirl
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For a faint hope that my review will instill some motivation, I love this story so much! Lol, it's so accidentally cute. The language barrier is both frustrating and inspiring, and you can feel the characters own frustrations with it also. I love cuddling scenes; they don't get nearly enough time to themselves, poor couple! Well...they get alone time, but not time for talking. Not going to lie, though; I'm looking forward to the bath scene lol. Curious, curious as to what will come up.
person behind-these-eyes
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited about your regular updates! I can’t wait to read the next chapter! I have to say, you are a brilliant writer. You manage to make each story so exciting, the characters are so real, funny but tangible (and sexy, of course). Thank you so much for posting all your wonderful stories.

This latest chapter was wonderful as usual. I loved the bit at the beginning, where Kasan was stressing that Max wouldn’t want to bond with him – that if Max were to find his own purpose, he wouldn’t want Kasan. And the fact that his composure was broken with his wild tale – hilarious. But really, I hope Kasan soon realizes that he really, really can’t treat Max like a child.

schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I just found this story two days ago! It is really fantastic (I was up reading till midnight)
I can't wait for Kasam to figure out the pet shokan thing :D Androcles could save Max with others watching, maybe it would stop them from killing him and Max would gain a lot of respect for having such a dangerous pet :D
Please update soon!
person Ash
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story so much! I always catch myself checking to see if you've updated while I read your other stories. I can't wait to see the bath scene coming up, and I really enjoy the blossoming romance Max is starting to show for Kasan. I really kind of want to see more of Max playing with Kasan's tail, now that he figured out how sensitive it is...hehehe. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!
person Oni
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have truly lived up to the name Twisted Hilarity. This story is just that. I have laughed so much through this story, and I love everything that you did with the plot, the characters, and the setting. I can find nothing wrong with this story, but everything good about it. Thanks for the incredible entertainment and I hope that you wrap up all the loose ends soon. I am excitedly waiting for the end of this cool epic.

Keep at it!