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man, that probably freaked max out. :( bad aosh!
ASOTA

The bath was even hoter than I thought it be and oil up time hoter than that:) But who's waiting and messing up their special time together?! This chapter was amazing ^_^

Hellloooooooooooo~! welcome back?! and. Yay and update!!! =D

and I must must say. Whoooooooooooaaaaaaaa~~~~

Kasan managed to keep his man-rod to himself! With a wet and naked Max right there in front of him!?!?!?! *claps Kasan* well done my man. well done... (good kitty~ XD *pets*)

But that's something. I think. the conversation they had, has gotta be the longest conversation they've ever had? Which is epic...
There were a number of chunks of their 'conversation' whereby I'm sure either party didn't understand each word the other said XD
well. at least they got the gist of the idea. Max sure is picking up kyashin fast! Smart lil Max. I wonder what other humans will he meet with Kasan manages to rescue them.
Will there by any human Max knows.?... maybe not. after all, it was a 'big ship', of people heading for work purposes... *shrugs shrugs*

and then........ and then...... DAMN AOSH!!! he did that on purpose right!!! damn him!
Kasan and Max didnt even do the nasty yet!!! party pooper! wet blanket! moron you Aosh! Someone get Zonta in on him!!!

Anyway. the plot and secrets of this story is really eluding me now. one moment I think I know where it is headed, the next moment it takes a completely different turn. well, I guess that's a good thing. you're keeping us on our toes, always peering around the corner, then said plot zooms past us in the other direction. and we're left "huh, what was that O_O blink blink"

no matter! I'm loving this anyway! =D

Till I see you again~ laters!

- nekoii ^___^

Chapter 25 Bathtime

HA!!!!!!!!

These two crack me up!!!!!!!!!!

Great writing!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!!!!!!

R

Come on now write more get those fingers a walking..........

OMG, this was getting so good, only for Aosh to spoil their fun. Oh man is Kasan gonna be pissed that his quirky bro has seen his consort au natural. This was so nice to come home to after a long day at work-so thanks! That said please continue. xD

Haha I loved the bath time it was super awsome to bad they got interupted, they seem to have bad luck. Thanks for the new chapters they were a treat and I can't wait to read some more.

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Aw, man, things were perfect until Aosh came and ruined the moment! DX But I have to wonder what he wants...

I can't wait to find out! ^//w//^

MEAN! Aosh! Don't just stand there! And stupid Kasan for not checking up on his partner but good job with the tongue action. Argh! I just want these two to have a little freaking time together! They need to sequester themselves in a house far far far far far FAR away from all other Kyashin and idiots who want to interrupt them all the damn time. Seriously! oh, but I hope Max gets to meet other humans. well good on ya for updating. Picked up my night :) toodles!

Ahhhhhhhhh!!!! That was such a cute chapter! Your writing's never been better, and the characters' interactions, thoughts and personalities are exactly what I've always dreamed of reading about. There is nothing I can say I would like done better or differently. This is perfection. I've recommended you to all my friends who like fanfic, cyber and otherwise. Good luck with further updates! ~kati-chan