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OMG Cliffhanger!!! I think I'm going to wait for you to update a couple more chapters before reading the next one just to make sure that it gets resolved. I'm actually completely ignoring that last line in my head because I'm just going to sit here and ponder about it if I don't. Otherwise, I can't wait!

BWA-HAHAHAHAHAAAH "All alone human?" Teeheehee . . . Nope! BWA-HAHAHAHAHAA Cat guts EVERYWHERE!! AAAHAHAHAHAHA! Seriously. Seriously screaming with laughter over here because I've soooo been waiting for this. *sings* New chew-toy for Androcles!!! I've imagined a thousand different ways to introduce Androcles to Kasan and the others and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I wonder what Androclese is? I hope its the big scary thing everyone is searching for and Max just has an amazing talent with them. I also hope they both (he and Kasan) stop being idiots sometime in the next decade. I suppose it made it doubly hard that Max has very few words at his disposal. But what is with Kasan just dumping him? He needs relationship skills. You don't leave after a fight. You gotta work it out. Poor little Max, poor Kasan! Ah, well this really picked up my day :) Keep the good work and the quick updates!

I knew it, the moment that Waran and Quim was looking all so happy, and Kasan just leaving Max there?!?!?!?!? I knew it, that the kidnapping will commence now! GRAAAAAAAAH! What a note to leave it off on! Kasan and Max are having some lovers tiff, and Max get's kidnapped! Just great... just great i tell you.

Great cliffhanger. Just great... and hey, Androcles is on the bed. Did they not see him? I thought them cat's didnt like Androcles... *shrugs shrugs*

Add to that.

Max is a linguist.
He's so used to being able to understand and communicate with people, that now, when he suddenly cant...
So, for perhaps the first time in his life, he is lost in translation. I wonder how frustrated he must be feeling...
What with the odd logic of Kyashin world whereby big sexy cats MUST have sex else they'll die. heheeee~

wokay~!
Thanks for the speedy update! =D
And thanks*sarcastic* for the cliffhanger eh~


- nekoii

ANother CHapter!!! Yeas! This is my favorite story of all time!
but, misunderstandings make me sad...
also, nooooo, don't hurt Max!
Super-Dog/Shokan to the rescue??
Can't wait to see what happens!!

I love you, and I love this. I was thinking: my, how bored I am, I wish I had something to do. And then, all of a sudden, I find this chapter! I would not complain if updates came this often usually. I love this story so hard, and that last cliffhanger was unbearable. This one is, too, but it's slightly more bearable than the last one...That doesn't mean I don't want to read the next chapter asap, though...because I do. In fact, that would be AMAZING if I read it soon...No rush, though. I couldn't possibly complain with the rising plotline and back-to-back updates...you take as much time as you need!

Aww, I felt so bad for Kasan. And I hope nothing happens to Max with Waran alone with him.

This really is a great idea for a story. I mean, a lot of people bitch about having "communication problems" in their relationships, but you've managed to create a romance plotline in which it's impossible for the two lovers to communicate at all. (I particularly enjoyed the "you've given me an STD!?" snafu.) Have you seen the film, Love Actually? One of the sub-plots involves a burgeoning relationship between a man who only speaks English and a woman who only speaks Portugese. If you haven't seen the movie, you should check it out.

If I have one criticism for the story so far, it's that the whole thing is taking place within the same, what, 4-day timespan? (I could be wrong on that figure, but I don't think it's more than a week.) I'm not sure you'd call it a pacing problem, because the plot is moving along, but I found myself - several times - opening up the next chapter, getting a few sentences in, and thinking "oh. we're still in that same afternoon?" After a while, a single day just gets bogged down. I don't really know enough about the technicalities of creative writing to explain that very well - it's just a gut reaction.

Anyway, thanks for the story - I'm enjoying both "TLPH" and "Nature's Choice" - and I hope you update again soon! :-)

WAAH! The crocodile tears are coming. Max and Kasan's first fight! How cute. I guess that things just were not mean't to happen in the baths. I just hope Max will not refuse to ever have sex in there. Maybe Kasan should post a guard next time. Things should get interesting with Waran and Quim and Max and Androcles all together in the same room. I can't wait to see what happens there. Thanks to Kasan for punching Aosh for me. I am still mad at Aosh for embarassing poor Max. Of course I understand that Aosh would not realize that Max is not used to such public displays. Great chapter. I am looking forward to the next update.

Plus I think that after whatever drama happens with Androcles and Waran and Quim, Max will be so happy to see Kasan that the fight will probably be forgotten. (I hope)