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Just re-read this for like the fifth or sixth time. Absolutely LOVE this story! It's been a while since you've updated this. I know you have a monthly update to "Husbands For Peace" - which I also LOVE, so that keeps you busy along with just daily life. Hope you are doing okay and also hope to see an update for this one soon as well. Looking forward to those other "books" in this world that you've previously mentioned. I really enjoy your writing. It pulls me into the world you've created so well that I have no problem imagining that the Kyashin really do exidt somewher in the universe. Hope to see much, much more from you. :)

Please update. I want to see Leero mate with the king.

I... cannot believe what idiots they're still being. They see Androcles and know its him, its obvious the dog will always protect Max—and Kasan by extension—and they're STILL freaking out over him? The fugde? Also amazed that no one has realized their "harmless little Tosa" keep trying to kill Max. This last bout was even in front of witnesses. Pft.

Poor, stupid... *grumble*

And PLEASE tell me there is going to be another bout of pissed-off Max, with idiot guards heedlessly invading their SECLUDED SPACE THAT THOSE ASSES HAD NO RIGHT NOR PROBABLE REASON TO INVADE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Again: the Frack. Sexing couple does not need the invasion to have their safty garanteed. That's what the badass dogs are for.

Pathetic losers.... pervy cat voyers.

And because it keeps hiding the email (at least from my lazy/forgetful-when-it-comes-to-login ass), just add "(at)hotmail( dot)com" to the end.

I had to pause long enough to make this observation, as I currently understand it.

I find it so fricken hilarious that the Kyoshin pets are apparently deadly animals to humans, and that the deadly Shokan is a safe, intelligent guardian to Max. It's also infuriatingly amusing how they dont know the thing to attack Max was Zo's pets, and not the misinterpreted Shokan guardian. Which, I honestly hope Androcles is clever enough to stay safe. Max would be both in terrible danger without it, and devastated.

That said, I should also comment on how this is turning out like the Dragonsong trilogy for me. Those books pissed the utter crap out of me. And I loved them.

*pauses at bath interruption* ...Know what else is pissing me off right now? Max doesn't seem to have the cojones to act like any other man—or woman—would in that particular situation. And the nanites are no excuse. He's told Kasan no to the sex, that the mood is completely spoiled, and Kasan doesn't understand; misinterprets, even. So why the UTTER FRACKING FRACK has Max NOT socked Kasan again? It isn't enough to hurt him, but sure as hell gets the 'pissed, fuck off' point across. Max doesn't put his foot down and insert his capability, he just rolls over like some Stalkholm chick... He hasn't even made the effort to find the word for 'rape' or 'non-consentual' in their laguage, and we know it exists.

In Max's place, I'd be beating Kasan over the head with the words "No sex long time, Max NO happy" to get the point across. And find ice to dump in his lap.

*Continues reading*

It is seriously disturbing how single minded and thoughtless to Max's wants that Kasan is turning out to be... Max needs to be a linguist and find the way to convey that, just because his body is responding, doesn't mean he wants it, as Kasan keeps assuming. Translate the words 'Max no sex slave'! That would get the desired response.

*bit further*

....*Pets Max* Good boy. You teach that nasty, selfish, ignorant little kitty his place.

*reads even further, and ends up bashing head into tablet, bemoaning absolute idiocy* Yep. There went all hope for Max, down the drain. He's horribly pathetic :(

Oh, loooook~ two nice, big chew toys...

ok, its been awhile since i last read this story and few days ago i stumbled upon it again after so long and i just noticed u update it, thanks so much :D but now i really want to read more so please please more update? :*

Thank you so much for continuing on with this story! Your writing is still clear and wonderful to read! Kasan and Max are just wonderful and tender and stupid together it's absolutely perfect! Please please continue writing and for anything bad that happens in your life I am truly truly sorry. I hope you have the best of luck in your life and that good things happen to you. Anyone with this much talent deserves a wonderful life!

SO SO SO GOOD!!! Love this story so much!!! Please please PLEASE UPDATE

I know it has been a long while, but am I wrong in hoping for an update or an end to this story? I still come back to check for updates so please don't disappoint and give this great story a wrap-up? Thanks.

How I wish that they could understand each other yet !!!!!! The last sex was very humourous, poor Kasan !
Thank you very much, as always... It's such a pleasure to read your delicious stories !

Bonjour de la France,
Merely Truth