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Oh man I fee so bad for Kasan and I can't believe you left it at such a cliffie! But still wonderful as always, I hope you get to update again soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

WAAAA!! OMG I was soooo happy to see that you had updated so fast!!! Then you leave us with this ending!!!! GAAA!!! Please, hurry!!!!! Write your little fingers off!! Holy crap!! Awww poor Kasan, can't understand a thing Max says....maybe if Max tells Zonta, he'd understand and could translate??? And at least Max's lovely protective puppy is in the room hiding so that those horrible cats can;t take him...but I have a feeling you're going to make Max realize that they are bad but Kasan will think they were just in the room because of the shokan "sigh", why can't he just understand max....seriously....I think Max needs to take some mime or sharades classes!!! lol!!! Keep up the awesome work cuz I'm addicted to this story like crack. ;)

I never though Kasan and Max would have such a big misunderstanding... well, in the long ride of life, this will probably be just a little bump...

that last part was really frightening... but I'm hoping Androcles will save him! after all... he is in the same room...
ATTACK ANDROCLES! ATTACK!...

Stop! Where are you going? Wait!... well, I guess he doesn't listen to me... but he does listen to Max... so... Androcles will save the day!
(I hope?)

Waran seems to be a really creepy guy... I fell sorry for his mate... specially since Shoru is a good guy (even if other kyashin don't trust him much)... always with a scowl on his face, but a good guy nonetheless...

please update!

I have a feeling of foreboding. Something is up.

Damn. What a mess! It has to be if even Aosh thinking about apologizing to Max. If only Kasan would've just held Max and let him calm down after Aosh interrupted. He didn't understand that Max had just made some uncomfortable discoveries about himself. One was how much control,in a sense,that Kasan had over his body. He didn't understand how Kasan seemed to override his embarrassments with just a touch or smile. Another was that he didn't care as much as he thought he should. It disturbed and angered him that even though Aosh was watching he was still able to finish. It went against every social moral he'd learned. All that embarrassment and confusion combined into a very angry and hurtful outburst.
I ached for poor Kasan. When Max's words sank in I could practically feel his heart break. His misery and uncertainty were very palpable. I used all these words just to say and hopefully,show appreciation of what excellent job you did in conveying their emotions.

And I do hope you let Androcles bite Waran and Quim. They'll likely try to play it off as protecting Max from a shokan attack if they're caught. On pins and needles until the next chapter.

AAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHH!!!!! How could you leave it at that??? HOW!!!? You're so cruel...

Ah! The miscommunication! I thought you didn't do angst? *cry*

Thank you for the speedy update :) I lurve this story, it's my all-time favourite, accross all fandoms and originals too. I've been imagining this part of the plot when the baddies kidnap Max. In my imagination they send a live video feed back to that massive room that our kitties trashed and Max is all teary but brave, blue eyes... It'll be interesting to see what really happens. Lots of drama, I hope?

These two better make up soon, or I don't know if I'll be able to cope. You wouldn't want to be responsible for an innocent woman's nervous breakdown, would you? lol I suppose I'll just have to be a good girl and wait.

I think it's funny cause Kasan is presented as being so powerful and experienced, but we're coming to see that when it comes to matters of the heart, he is woefully ignorant, though I suppose the cultural differences don't help him in his quest.

Are the scary cats gonna notice the doggie? Will he help Max out? Don't kill off the doggie!! They don't do it in films, so neither should you. Please?

Good luck with further posts, I'm anxiously awaiting them! :)

Androcles is still in the room!!! I hope no one hurts him... I hope Waran gets his *ss kicked, but then everyone hates shokans, right?

Hoho!! Max seems to be in trouble!
I loved the chapter!
Bye
M

Ahhhhh!!!! This cliffy ending left me wanting even more than the last one did!! You should probably just start updating every day or so. :D Love ya!!!!!

Gah!!! Noo! That's evil! Leaving that cliff hanger!

Please update again sooon!! I'll go crazy!

Please and Thank you!