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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person zimpra
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's some epic miscommunication right there between Kasan and Max. They almost deserve a reward for it. Poor Kasan. He needs a hug really badly. It's nice to see Max coming to terms with his attraction to Kasan. At least now sex is fine as long as there aren't any other kyashin around. lol. Keep up the good work! I really love this story!
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26. Wohoo! Finally it's getting down! Go Max, go! Show those two timing cat guards that you won't go down without a fight!!! My tummy has been in knots for the last two chapters wondering when things will climax and how it will go about doing it.

Now this misunderstanding between Kaasan and Max has just put him in danger while Kaasa is trying to figure out what to do. I hope that Zonta gets there in time to help Max, but then again, I hope that no one makes it in time so that the story can get rolling with the whole clan tracking down those stinky muggers and putting them outta their misery.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!!!
person butterpie
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah, just when Max and Kasan finally start to work things out his idiot bro has to muck it all up. The culture shock sets in and bye bye to fun bathtime, and hello hurt feelings and sad misunderstandings. I only hope that Androceles can save the day when Warren attempts to kidnap Max. The creep needs to be dealt with pronto! Anywho thanks again for this chapter as my work day was the pits until I came home to find this pressie of yours awaiting me-huzzah ;)!!!
person miles
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh ! Queen of the cliff !! ^^
This chapter made me laugh so hard !!
But you have to update very soon ! I can't wait for the next one...
person Doppelganger
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually just read your stories on your website so I don't think I've ever left a review for you before...but I decided I should start!

Poor Max D: Poor Kasan! Misunderstandings just come out so much worse if you can't speak much of the same language, huh? And damn those cursed guards! I hope they don't hurt Max! T_T Hoping to read another chapter soon!
person anie
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wait. Wait wait wait. You gave us this wonderful chapter because you didn't want your audience to be left hanging on the LAST chapter? I'm left hanging now! I need more! Seriously, the level of cliff hanger you just threw out. . . .

I am so desperate for the next chapter. This one was very well done. I loved the sexy bits, and their argument had me super intent on all the drama and the storyline. I want to see what comes next, 'cause I'm sure it'll be big!
person guizmorin
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi !
I like very much the story you have here, and also the one called Ice wind's bride.
There is a few things that's got me hooked, like the problem with language, and different world/culture. The fact that your characters have their own point of view , and do not always reach the same conclusions is precious, especially in a story with as much sex as there is in this one. I hope you will surprise me with the shokran (sp?) issue, but already I'm happy because You didn't solve it in just 2 chapters. I'm anxious to see what will happen next in the story, whit the other humans, with the kidnapping ... I hope to see Max less hopeless, I'd like to see him being able to hinder his future kidnapper enough to escape, or to help for his rescue. I want him to prove to Kasan that while he is frail compared to the cats, he is resourceful. Less max doll/sex toy !! (Even if you partly already did that by giving him importance for other character, another really good thing.) I does not need to be physical independence, but he's supposed to be a good thinker/intellectual/scholar, so away from the sex-toughs derived from kasan he should be able to do something. I enjoy the sex, but what makes me read it's that not just lemon-lemon-lemon.
I will read what will happen next with pleasure. Sorry for any grammatical/spelling mistakes, french person here.
person Southwind
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Max really messed up, hurting Kasan. It's time for him to either accept that he's attacted to Kasan and enjoys being with him in All ways. Kasan has been the one to initiate intimacy each time. Max,after fighting with himself emotionally, gives in and enjoys it. To fix this situation, or at least help, Max needs to go to Kasan and show him how he feels. I don't know if Max is truly ready to accept the relationship with him and Kasan. If the other humans are found, what will the impact be on their relationship? Oh well, too early to ask.

Loving the story, more please!
person Lil
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
eeekk...a cliffy! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I will be on tip-toes till the next one lol. Thanks for sharing¢¾
person Kuromei
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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O! M! G!!!!!!!!!!! First, you make me wanna cry with all the heartbreak, and then Max is left all alone with Waran! DX Kasan, come back! ;_____;

Update, dammit! Uke, The Other Side of the Kazaana and even Nature's Choice can wait, this has to update soon!! DX .... Pweaze? *wibble* ;^;