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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Spicy Pepper
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO! MAX! D:
Kasan go back! ;-;
This is what I was mentally screaming at the end!
AUGH! I need more hot cat/ tiny man sex and, I need the evil cat Warran to be eaten by Max's lovely 'dog' XD
Love LOVE LOVE this story so much! When it gets updated I literally squeal with joy >.<
Yours, Spicy
person Trix
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, don't leave us hanging like that!!
person Bunnigirl
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! Is the doggy thing gonna kick butt?! I hope so. :) Cuz from what I read the dog thingie is still in there! EXCITINGGG!

I <3 this story dearly. I hope the next update comes soon!

Your writing has been keeping this soldier highly entertained. I'm trapped in Fort Dix, NJ until May 28th, and your stories along with DextrousLeftie, LunarWench, and Wolverine have pulled me through many a dull hour and made it totally rad. You guys ROCK! :D

Looking forward to the next installment!
~bunni <3
person Bunnigirl
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
... It cut my review off because I made the less-than-three heart... ;-;

Oh well, I shall type it out again!

I (heart) this story! Your stories (along with DextrousLeftie and LunarWench) have helped this soldier pass many a dull hour as I sit trapped in Fort Dix, NJ. All three of you have such great style of writing and originality in the tales you spin. And lots of spicy, smutty goodness! :D

Greatly looking forward to the next installment!
~Bunni
person Liin
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MOAR!
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
0.0 what?! NOooooo! You cant end a chapter there!!! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT NOW >,< MUST!!! KNOW!!!! Amazing chapter by the way lol. I love the angst fest going on :3 I hope your computer hold up well until the next chapter is up ;)
person Perona
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha I can't wait to see what Warren thinks when he sees Andronocles. Ah poor Max he's always in the middle of some drama or other. Love this chapter, love the whole story actually. Can't wait for more.
person roro237
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was great!! I laughed at all the interruptions:) Poor Max:( I hope Zonta has time to help Max with more of their language. My heart went out to him not being able to say what he wanted. Now the plots thicken! The dirty rotten ally cats! A misunderstanding gave them the openning they needed to get Max. Kasan is going to freak out when he fines out. Have I told you how much I love your story:) I love your story! Oh and the way this chapter started off was: ok after two minutes I couldn't come up with a better word than just HOT with a side order of nose bleed ^_^
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh cliffhanger! Androcles to the rescue! I hope? xD
I can't wait to see how poor Leero is doing, also.

<33 your stories.
person mw0627
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol, not alone! Tear him apart super alien doggy!I have been waiting people to notice his pet and this is it!