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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They better treat Androcles well!
person Butterbutt
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Androcles!!! NOOOOOO!!!!! *sob sob*
person lucmaria
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
at least u updated thanks u...please don't tortured us your fans with long period waiting for next updated..........
person kati
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
person Dekorx
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shoot! I was so excited, thinking you had another chapter up! XD I already read this one on your website. T_T Awww man!
person dutsada
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was practically tearing when i thought Androcles was gonna die. Its a miracle indeed that the shokan was protecting Max when everyone was hunting the animal for killing the others. Perhaps it had been killing the baddies? It was amusing the part where it was giving Aosh a look when he shouted for help lol! could imagine the scene. Hope the next one would be up soon~ thank you!
person ORKCHILD
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad you got the new computer and I hope you keep posting this story here because I really enjoy it. It seems to me that shokan were guard animals and the knowledge has been lost over time. So when max bonded with the young shokan by feeding it it became his protector.
person jdbbrz27
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was quite exciting I loved the Shokan trying so hard to protect Max and then helping Aeosh especially with how Aeosh was so scared of it to begin with it seems Max has turned this wild Shokan into a sweet lap dog and talk about confusing the cats now that is hilarious to say the least. And the last line was absolutely priceless and I hope they keep this Shokan so he can protect Max when Kasan isn't there and of course to give Max company as well it sure would help Max feel a little more safe. And god I hope that Kasan and family will find sweet little Max and evil stupid Warren and double evil Quim as soon as possible maybe they could give Quim to the Shokan to destroy and Warren to Kasan to destoy now that would be justice but you'd have to let Aeosh have a go at Quim and Warren to it would be only fair right anyway thanks for updating and I'll be waiting for the next one.
person miles
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fast ! Thanks for sharing this new chapter !
Can't wait to know what's going to happened to Max...
person Reymond
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's so very GOOD ! I will die if I don't get the whole story to savour little by little in one reading !!!
Thank you very much, will have to wait...

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