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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person chibko
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LoL Is this Shokan really like a pet dog and not so much their mortal enemy? Lol I find it funny now, the cat vs dog thing.

Quick, go save Max Kasan!
person blu kat
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was going to wait until you were finish with it before I read or even left a review but I just couldn't wait. I like to leave a review for the whole story instead of each chapter. Love your story and the characters. My favorite part is guessing what could happen next and seeing if I'm right about certain problems. I was right about Androcles. Thanks for the fantastic read and entertainment. Keep up the great work.
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
27.... oooooh gods!!! you cant stop there!!!!
person my_perversities
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! A new chapter!!! They finally meet Max's dog lol. I'm sooo happy they all get along and aren't tryin to kill Androcles, they realized what happened!! How could you leave it like this!!! I can't be left on a cliffy like this for weeks!!! AGGGGG!!!
person ayachan
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, and Max was so close to escaping too! Great chapter! I held my breath the whole time! lol
person kylee123
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHH! I can't believe they kidnapped Max! he is in the hands of th ebad guys and they could do all sorts of horrible things to him! Poor Androcles and Aosh. Waran and Quim have truly done it now. There is no turning back from injuring one of the royal princes. What is poor Max going to do? I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for us. Hurray for your new computer!
person Nacht Kind
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D8

NUUUUUU! Oh sweet, baby JESUS, that's a harsh cliffhanger! I'm notoriously bad at reading high-tension action scenes, I skim them and think franticly "Give me the highlights! How does this end?!" So, this scene pretty much killed me. Though my logical brain is insisting that they must be reunited swiftly both for the heat and your happy endings quota(which I love, angst is nice but I need something positive I can rely on), my emotions are going haywire with panic for everyone's safety. Including and especially Max and Androcles' well being. I doubt you'll let them kill the big lug after Aosh's explanation. I'm actually kind of hoping that, unless Kasan gets fucking ON IT RIGHT NOW, which he probably will, Androcles will go with him and help track Max down. I mean, as if having a throwback consort weren't enough, you could have the most terrifying, lovable, badass, intelligent tracking hound ever working with him.

Still dying and reading Ezperanza(not doing my pulse any favors, either, thanks)
Nacht
person piggy-muffin
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHAT??? Don't stop there I need to know what is going to happen next! Please please give me more soon ok.
person mw0627
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good doggy!Now everyone knows how awsome you are, you saved Max from being too stupid and getting away from you.
person kristinalinda
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I freaking love you for writing this story! I was so scared that Androcles would die, or that one of Kasan's relatives would kill him thinking he attacked Max! What a relief! Thank you also for not making this chappie quite as much of a cliffhanger, I dont think I Could have taken it LOL