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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person miles
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters took my breath away ^^
Run, run, little Max and find your lover !!!
person js
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this love this sooo much
update soon
person kylee123
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I meant to say Shoru is a hero - not a herp! Betrayed by me keyboard again.
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
arrrrrrrrrrgggggggggg you must write faster!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. I love this story. please up date soon.
person makki
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay the shokan lives! Hugz this was amazing I do hope you update again soon! This is such a brilliant story
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well, at least they won't hurt androcles! and poor max! save him!
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kasan better get that steak and thus Androcles back on his paws. He'll find Max for sure. Maybe he even has all his little Shokan friends at his call. Don't they usually live in groups? Fine with me if they tear Waran's bunch to shreds.

Awesome job, you did!!
person Saloney
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Go little Max! :D I'm glad that little Max isn't just sitting around getting tortured. Great update, hope to see more soon!
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the 2-chapter update! thank yyou thank you thank you!!! These chapters were a little more serious but I really really liked them. Can't wait for the next update!!
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
surely u r putting up a third chapter today. the suspense is too much. i have to know what's behind the door and u keep teasing me with the king and leero. i felt like i was watching an action movie. i guess i'll try to be patient. :-(