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These were another two brilliant chapters. I'm glad that the Shokan is being helped and it@s good to see Max escaping and trying to help Kasan. He's not as incompetant as he thinks he is. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Max meets up with any of the other Shokan. I look forward to reading more and thanks for the extra chapter!

go max! you save them peeps!
ASOTA

Thank you! Thank you for Memorial Day and delays! Two in one day!..... and I still want more. *laughing* Waiting patiently! *waving*

Wow, you posted twice since I last looked! More, more! 'Purr

Oh wow. I just found and read this fic it took me 3 days and I absolutely love it and I cant wait for the next chapter.

I love the characters how the Prince brothers get up to antics together and I love Max and his comments to himself.

I imagine that Kasan will be in for a real shock whn the barriers to communication between him and Max falls away and he realises that Max is not a delicate flower.

^______^

Seriously? Have you every kissed someone right after they vomited? That made me crack up.

I am SO glad this was a double-update. XD As glad as I am that Aosh will live, and Androcles will be allowed to live and help Kasan find Max. And glad that Max could escape. I guess Shoru isn't as big a bastard as I thought he was. He's still a prick, but still...

I just hope Max doesn't run into wild shokan. I doubt they'd be as nice as Androcles. XP Though, knowing Max's luck.... Eep!

*wriggle* I can't wait for the next update! XD

chap 28

You like the word eviscerate don't you? XD

and the whole idea of nanites and kouloc astounds me again. this is a whole new universe.
heat spikes faster when you are angry since the kouloc multiplies.

then metal piercings to aid in the nanites healing funky business.

and Shokan's are definately smarter than Kyashin. Taking the dog, and cat, comparisons...

I like cat's more, but dog's are definately smarter.

GO ANDRO-herculus!!! FIND MAX!!

chap 29.

OUH GOD! WHAT A CLIFFHANGER! be-curse that skill of yours!!! having the skills of cliffhangers, it's the most sadistic form of torture ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shoru. and that 'other person' whom i can bet my toes on that it is another human. poor human. i wonder what hell he went though already... oh!

HELP! COME SOON HELP!!! i wonder how in the WORLD little Max is going to find his way back... through the jungle, then through the citadel... then back to Kasan... and I hope Kasan STAYS PUT.
and ANDROCLES! heal up quickly and come get Max~!!!!

gyaaaaaaaaahh~~~!!!! Next chapter please come soon!!!

Wowsers, thank goodness Kasan's aunt decided to save Androcules, for now at least. Aosh is on the mend, and that is all good, but what's going on with Max? Anywho thanks for these two wonderful pressies. A real pleasure to enjoy when RL is such a bummer at times-like now, so once again thanks alot! ^_____^