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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person melsa
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Max is a puppy, one can only hope androcles thinks to check with his pack with Kasan very quickly.
person Kuromei
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If the situation wasn't so urgent, I'd be laughing my ass off at the fact that Max is being treated like a shokan puppy. X3

Why, though, are they treating him that way? It's reasonable to think that Androcles' scent is still on him, but shokan are smart enough to see that Max's shape is all wrong to be one of their pups... It also raises the question of what's going to happen once Androcles is on his feet and can track Max down, with Kasan on his heels.

Is that Andy's pack? Will they recognize him? Will they let Kasan have Max? *clutches head* Ohhh, so many questions. @__@ But, since there are so many questions, I can't wait for the next chapter to see if any will be answered. X3 Until next time!
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!!! I hate you!!!! Well actually I don't but that is pure evil. Leaving the chapter in a cliff-hanger like that!!!! Anyway, I absolutely love this story. I am incredibly happy that I came a crossed it!!!! The fact that this is all your own imagination blows my mind. Especially with the complexity of your story. LOVE IT!!!!! Can't wait for more. Seriously, I can't wait.
person Lyserian
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why, but I've suddenly started visualizing Max from "Where the Wild Things Are" when I read this story. XD
person shiden
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as usual great story can't wait for the next chapter
person tsk
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story,esp. Max.I can't wait for chapter 30,You are an amazing writer.
person wusswoot
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi I just wanted to let you know how much I love your story, I love Kasan and Max, but all the side characters are great too. I love that it's funny and hot, plus all the intrigue and aaargh a cliffhanger. I'm going to friend you on lj so I know when there's an update. Just spent 3 days reading the whole story so far, would have been quicker but damn work got in the way of my fic reading!! Loving it xx
person makki
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god i'm so excited! I come back from australia to find 2 more chapters! eeek! Lovely and wonderful and never enough! LOL plz update sooon! you're so damn amazing!
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are anexcllent writer, can't get enough of this story! Wow! I just read this again for like the 5th time (3rd for chapeters 25+). Originally found it after you had up thru Chapter 12 posted. Absolutely love this story. But AHHHHH! another cliffy in chapter 29 - evil, evil Twisty. At almost 30 chapters it takes me a second to realize Max & Kasan have only been together a few days and already Kasan wants a joining while Max is extremely fond of Kasan (though he won't admit it) Apparently it's still too much of a shock that he enjoys sex with a guy 0_0
So many sub plots to explore with this fic, So many questions to answer - will the Kyashin find Max's humans, and how many? Will Kasan save Max (and beat Warren's ass in the process), Will Kasan ever ask Max for a joining, what will Max say? Will Max learn enough Hinta so he and Kasan can undersand each other better? Does Aosh get himself a human consort? Can Max help them learn how to fix the Citadel defenses? What about Shovak? Who is behind the purist movement? Will Shoru ever stop being a prick? IS the King gonna be Leero's consort? What about the poor throwback boy in the cells? What happens to Androcles when he hits the age to mate since he seems so attached to Max? and uppermost in everyone's minds - When do we get to see Kasan using his tail on Max during sex??(wonder which guard wins that bet...heh hee) and will Max ever get to top. Wonder if Kasan & Max would ever adopt? whew! So many questions, so much more to explore with these characters (and so many yummy smex scenes to read)- I can't wait for more...Hope you feel better soon and can update again. Waiting on pins and needles...
person TeeCub
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely amazing story! I'm completely in love with the distinct personalities of all of your characters, and the depth of the world that you have created. All in all - LOVE IT! This is a story that I def. plan to read and reread. Thank you for sharing it :)