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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person booka
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY UPDATES!! :D

... Totally don't see where this is going. But I like it! It was so cute.
More pwease!
person willowsrain
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. please update soon! Kasan has to get to Max before the heat comes or he gets found by the bad guys. Everyone needs rescuing! please please please update soon.
person Itara
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It's good to see Max using the skills that he has. It's really funny that the Shokan think that Max is a puppy. I wonder how he'll escape their clutches. I look forward to reading the next chapter and thank you for all your hard work!
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon D:
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooove this series. This is to writing, as the Mona Lisa is to painting. The characters are great and I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next. Thank you for redeeming my faith in the storytelling art.
person S.Tori
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this chapter was ADORABLE. HE HAS BEEN ADOPTED BY WILD SHOUKANNNNN <3
(I hope that he finds a way to get back to Kasan! I love that shoukan take to him, though. Is it something about his general smell, or is it that they found him in a nest-area, and so he smelled like a puppy because he'd been in a nest-area?)

fjkaldsjf SO CUTE OMG.

Poor Max, though, thwarted by well-meaning adoptive shoukan. (at least there aren't thorns involved with being shoukan-groomed).

I really hope that whatever happens, he can keep his seeming affinity for shoukan. Yes, he's an honorary cat -- but the idea of having a 'family' of elephant-sized dogs to protect from the other giant-sized-everything of the world seems like a good one.

BASICALLY, YAY, I AM HAPPY. <3
person Em
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the puppies! I'm wondering if Max's dog is going to come and 'rescue' him? Can't wait to know more!f
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and every new chapter makes me insanely happy *lol*
this chapter was just too cute! looking forward to Max and Kasans reunion!
person mimi
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg one of the best things ive ever read >< hope to read more soon ^^
person Night_rose_fox
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I knew Max was never going to be a threat to the dog things, sorry can't remember how to spell the speicies, but for them to think of him as a puppy is just too great. This does make it rather hard for him to help Kaasan though. Wonder how this is going to work. I look forward to see the out come of this situation. I love a story that is hard to predict.