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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEASSSSSSSE UPDATE SOON
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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me encanto la historia, y aunque Max esta perdido en la jungla, estoy muy aliviada que este en tan buenas garras ^^.
La historia esta genial y espero que continúes con ella, es increíble desde que la encontré no he parado de leer.
La historia esta genial y espero que continúes con ella, es increíble desde que la encontré no he parado de leer.
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It has taken you a very long time for you to update this story. I am distressed over this. I have just about stopped reading AFF stories, because I have become finicky and find most of the stories to be mediocre at best. The Last Pure Human, however, is one of my favorite stories, even amongst published books. So, I would greatly appreciate an update. Also, can you email me when you update so I don't have to keep coming back to look. Jimmychoo2shoes@yahoo.com
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when u finish this.....please publish this.........i wanna buy it so badly.....ToT its so good
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*in awe* Never before have I loved a story as much as this one! Seriously it really pulls you into the world!
I can't wait to see the next update! It's on such an edge!
I hope Androcles and Kasan can find him soon!
-and adopt Max's new shokan family! lol I was thinking that if they take too long to rescue him, Max should just ride over to the citadel on his new shokan family. Wouldn't that be a fun surprise for the family back home? Hmmm..... Oh right, sorry!
I also hope that Aosh is up and moving again and that Max gets to find that out soon! I think Max might hate him a little less now, but that could just be because he thinks he's dead. I always love/hate it when we know something crucial that a main character doesn't. It's amusing -I get some kind of sadistic pleasure out of their misplaced sadness- but at the same time I wanna say "Nooo! You're all wrong!!!" if that makes any sense at all...
Aosh and Zonta are my favorite side-characters! *is a sucker for redheads* *is a sucker for twins* *is a sucker for nerds* *is a sucker for cocky jerks* Quadruple-Whammy! It's irresistible~
By the by~ I saw this awesome line in chapter 29 a little less than halfway down the page describing Shoru, and it really made me do a double-take. "His eyes were so angry Max expected them to shoot deadly sporks at him."
'Sporks' at him.
Deadly sporks.
Deadly fork/spoon hybrids coming out of someone's eyes....
*roflao* I'm sorry, but I really got a kick out of that! XDDD The amazing thing is - it might not even be a typo! It's so much better this way I think! A unique twist on a common phrase. Genius! I wholeheartedly approve! <3
Anywhoos~ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME STORY! I know life is full of bumps, you just need to kick them in the ass and cherish the great times! ;p
Much love,
That one (annoying) reader
I can't wait to see the next update! It's on such an edge!
I hope Androcles and Kasan can find him soon!
-and adopt Max's new shokan family! lol I was thinking that if they take too long to rescue him, Max should just ride over to the citadel on his new shokan family. Wouldn't that be a fun surprise for the family back home? Hmmm..... Oh right, sorry!
I also hope that Aosh is up and moving again and that Max gets to find that out soon! I think Max might hate him a little less now, but that could just be because he thinks he's dead. I always love/hate it when we know something crucial that a main character doesn't. It's amusing -I get some kind of sadistic pleasure out of their misplaced sadness- but at the same time I wanna say "Nooo! You're all wrong!!!" if that makes any sense at all...
Aosh and Zonta are my favorite side-characters! *is a sucker for redheads* *is a sucker for twins* *is a sucker for nerds* *is a sucker for cocky jerks* Quadruple-Whammy! It's irresistible~
By the by~ I saw this awesome line in chapter 29 a little less than halfway down the page describing Shoru, and it really made me do a double-take. "His eyes were so angry Max expected them to shoot deadly sporks at him."
'Sporks' at him.
Deadly sporks.
Deadly fork/spoon hybrids coming out of someone's eyes....
*roflao* I'm sorry, but I really got a kick out of that! XDDD The amazing thing is - it might not even be a typo! It's so much better this way I think! A unique twist on a common phrase. Genius! I wholeheartedly approve! <3
Anywhoos~ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME STORY! I know life is full of bumps, you just need to kick them in the ass and cherish the great times! ;p
Much love,
That one (annoying) reader
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the double-review! Darn thing cut my original review off halfway because I'd put one of those less-than-three heart symbols in and they do not approve. *pout*
Whoopsies! ;p
Quick Summary of what was lost - THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME STORY! You're amazing! *hug* If you ever put this story in print, I will definitely buy a copy! Two copies!
~I know life is full of bumps and that you're wrestling one right now (kick it's ass!) but I hope things get better real soon! You know you've got A LOT of people rooting for you! ;p
Good luck with everything and I hope that you have a wonderful holiday season!
Much love,
That one (annoying) reader
Whoopsies! ;p
Quick Summary of what was lost - THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME STORY! You're amazing! *hug* If you ever put this story in print, I will definitely buy a copy! Two copies!
~I know life is full of bumps and that you're wrestling one right now (kick it's ass!) but I hope things get better real soon! You know you've got A LOT of people rooting for you! ;p
Good luck with everything and I hope that you have a wonderful holiday season!
Much love,
That one (annoying) reader
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, it is unusual but very entertaining. I have not been able to find another like it. I await your next update!
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Howdy! Just a shout-out & thanks for this awesome story. We're kinda snowed in here in the northwest, so I have been occupying myself with rereading this fic for, oh I don't know, like the 8th time? *slight blush* Even with it unfinished (and paused in such a terrible spot!!) it is so much more engaging (and better written!) than most other stories I've seen. :)
Anyway, it sounds like life is keeping you more than busy, which I totally understand. Updates would be great, but health and home (and temporary single-parenthood!) definitely come first. Just wanted to say "hi!" and that you have a fan in WA who checks your page *whispers* every day for changes.
Happy Thanksgiving & hope you can feast the day away!
Rae
Anyway, it sounds like life is keeping you more than busy, which I totally understand. Updates would be great, but health and home (and temporary single-parenthood!) definitely come first. Just wanted to say "hi!" and that you have a fan in WA who checks your page *whispers* every day for changes.
Happy Thanksgiving & hope you can feast the day away!
Rae
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October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
updated please........
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Completely addicted. I reread it again for like the fifth time, and I still can't get enough. I am never bored by this story. Ummm................Just wondering *shifty eyes* when you were going to update???? I mean not that I am trying to pressure you or anything but I would be internally grateful if you published soon. Antway love your work, please don't abandon this!!!