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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person kale
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey you're back! Good to see you posting again.
Thanks for the story update.
person crazyforkakashi
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks you for updating.i hope that Max is found soon.Will be lloking for the next update
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! I was SOOOO glad to see this update. Wondering what was going to happen next. Thank you for updating again. :).

Poor Kasan... he's in a bad way. How long until it's too late for him. Seems like he's nearly to the point where finding Max won't help his condition (or the koulac). And Max, he must be frantic about Kasan. How will Kasan get to MAx with all the shokan around - can Androcles help with that? OOOOhh so many questions waiting to be answered. This is my Favorite story on aff so I'll wait forever if I have to for an update. I've already read it thru at least Twice. Please update when you can - I'll be waiting on pins & needles for it. :)
person Just Lori
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking about the Last Pure Human today. Very excited to see an update.
person piggy-muffin
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! I had looked at this before i sat down for dinner and was thinking that it's been forever since there was a update. Oh i was so happy when after i was done dinner there was the new chapter. I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one please dont make me wait to long. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat.
person silver-whiterose
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg yes!!!!!! please tell me kasan finds max in the next chapter... the suspense is too much... great job in this chap!
person thelobstermobster
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! i was waiting impatiently and you didn't disappoint!
person plum2
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS. I KNOW ITS AN ANNOYING THING TO ASK, EVERYONE PROLLY TELLS U THIS BUT PLZ PLZ UPDATE THIS STORY WHEN U GET THE TIME. I LOVE IT.
person Sophie
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am completely enthralled by this story. Got to chapter thirty and realized it's not finished. How often do you update this story?

It sounds like this society needed someone with a fresh perspective. Max is completely clueless, so he doesn't know he's supposed to think of the evil menacing pink blobs as cute pets (why do people think they're pets?), want to murder the protective wolves, and trust nasty idiots. And I'm waiting to find out that the evil pink blobs are the source of whatever the disease is, and were introduced to the society by... hm... havne't sorted that out. Something to do with the purer strain, perhaps, which is why they only go after the human. I think. I can't imagine the Tri-something group would save evil, disease-ridden pink blobs, so they must be part of an evil plot. But that's just a theory.

Update please?
person oni
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As a Christmas gift to myself, I paid to read Husbands for Peace. It has been great, but like the rest of your work it is incomplete, and stops at the pentacle of the story. Are you gouing to continue any of your stories. I really hope that you get back to them. I am now invested in about 4 of your stories, none of which are completed. You are a good writer, please complete them. Happy New Year! Take care.