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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow new chapter. thank you. I´m sooo happy. I love this story :)
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The hunt is on!!! omg!!! THE HUNT IS ON! or more like, the rescue mission. rescue and retrieval.
Shoru is saved! and so is the young one. YAY!

and OMG! it's Kasan and Andro the unsuspecting duo, all alone in the jungle! where the shokan and pink blobs rule!!!

their eventual meeting , of Kasan plus Andro and the rest of the shokan pack... is gonna be dang interesting. if it ever happens. I can just imagine the chaos. gods.... *headwall* and Kasan in heat and barely thinking straight... lost with a pack of overprotective Shokan, and Andro... I wonder if Andro will help with some vague translating, so at least Kasan won't get killed upon reuniting with Max.
That would be mucho elstupido~

but really.... what is it with the 'humans'. and how they attract Shokan. with Andro, max is like, a potential mate. and with the other shokan, Max is their puppy. like weird. o_O"
but this Andro now, is the different from the Andro Max 1st met right? I remmember there being two shokan. one being much smaller than the current Andro.... hmmm.

I SHALL AWAIT YOUR NEXT UPDATE! and I hope it won't take terribly long *weeps*
THIS SORT OF SUSPENSE............. please, don't torture us.... *puppy eyes at you*

- nekoii
person Elina
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER cliff-hanger? Why? Dammit, you're gonna kill me with the suspense. :/
person Sophie84
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think any author's ever e-mailed me to inform me about a new chapter before. You spoil me terribly. Thank you. That chapter was awesome. But we still haven't found Max. And still, no one but Max has figured out the pink things are evil, and (in keeping with Kasan's current luck) are probably going to attack a steadily weakening Kasan before he finds Max. grrr. But I'm glad Shoru is finally free and back in the game. I like snarky characters. As always, I remain at the edge of my seat and eagerly await your next chapter.
person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am SO glad you updated this. I have been waiting for ages and I check like almost every day.
And YES! An update! Thank you so much!
person Flutterby
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Squueee! I'm so, so, SO happy that you updated! It's such a great dramatic chapter too, I love the action!

I feel real bad for Kasan, you write pain really well - emotionally and physically. The way you describe it really makes the reader feel it. Poor Kasan!!! I hope they find Max real soon!
On the other hand I'm glad to hear that Shoru's free at last! I missed his snark! It's sweet how he cares about that young throwback. My favorite part was when he asked him if he wanted to be as "short" as Kasan. lol

Aside from Andro-kees(I mean Androcles, after seeing it written the other way for so long...)I have new favorite characters now - those stupid, self-sacrificing idiots! XD Seriously, Kasan's men are the best! Loyalty like that is so sweet! I really hope that they end up okay in the end!

Awesome chapter! It was well worth the wait! I hope to see another update soon, I'm dying to see their reunion!
person kylee123
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happiness!
person krystal
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It took you FOREVER TO UPDATE!!!! It made me sooooo mad!! but now that you have updated im happy! :) This story, Ice Wind's Bride, and Crimson Samurai are my FAVORITE stories! Now if you update those other two stories i'll love you forever!!!! :) (seriously though UPDATE CRIMSON SAMURAI!!!!)

krystaldumas@yahoo.com
person Somnium
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! So excited! Thank you Thank you Thank you for updating! OOh, but Kasan is gonna die if you don't write the next chapter soon, that would be bad. Poor Max, left all alone. And just when he was really starting to get this whole relationship thing. Soooo, sad. Hope he doesn't die ;)
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My whole body went taut and i squealed with joy when I saw a new chapter! YAY! I'm so happy! hopefully life will calm down a bit for you and you'll get more time to write this year! We will all be right here eagerly waiting for you to update! Your stories are AMAZING!