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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Fallout-Angel
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh i can't wait for them to find Max and im really interested about the other human......will there be a story for him...he sounds adorable :)
person maaes
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG. great story. i wonder how max got to the slave place. really want to know if he kasan ever finds max and *u know*
please update...no pressure or anything, but top ten stories on aff
person Somnium
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story just makes every day a bit better. And I want to offer my help as a beta if you need it for editing and what-not. (No worries, I'm trustworthy and with a Writing B.A. to boot!) Just pop me an e-mail if you need any help!
person butterpie
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wowsers this just keeps getting better all the time. I hope Kasan and Androceles find Max soon. Thank you for this chapter as both the weather and RL have been bogging me down hard.
person kat
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so i just read all of what you have posted in just two days with a total of 8 hrs of sleep altogether... i just have to say I absolutely LOVE this story, Max`s reactions and Kasan`s family, heck all of your characters are really well written and made me laugh histarically in a number of occassions....this is a masterpiece and I really can`t wait for the rest! =]
person blu kat
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's great that your health is getting better, the most imporant thing is to take care of yourself first. Love reading this story. The plot and characters are just great, the suspense is killing me and wondering what going to happen next. That to me makes a great story and keeps me interested. So, thanks for the read.
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Weirdest thing is I was thinking about this story yesterday and wondering when it would be updated! Now I check it and it is updated!! YAY! I love how the suspense of the story just keeps getting higher and higher. What will happen when they reach Max and find him in a nest(?) of shokan? Will they bang before it's too late? I dunno, and can't wait to find out. P.S. I like the character development between Kasan and Androcles.
person -x-superspazz-x-
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Another cliffy! Oooh I was so hoping that he'd find him in this chapter! Next one then! I have my fingers crossed!
I was so thrilled to see that you updated! I had been checking every day! I will continue to check daily! XD
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I let out a girly scream when I saw an update to this. This was one of the very first stories I read on this site, so seeing an update TOTALLY made my night. So worried about Kasan.. I hope he gets to max in time. He HAS to. (worryworry) I really hope that the next chapter comes out soon.. hopefully within a month this time? x3 Then again. I'm bad with updates myself... Pleeeaaaseee.
person wynja
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAWD! I'm so happy theres a new chapter of this! I wish you all the best like lots of time and inpiration and good health and everything else you might need to continue this because it's killing me that I can't read on! AAARRGH! ;)