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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I've recently read all of the chapters of your story "Last Pure Human". I love that story, you've come up witha brilliant senerio for this story and a wonderul plot. Plus your characters are very well thought out. I believe you mentioned you have another story involving the cat people. I was wondering if you were going to write a story with a human female at all? I'm curious how they would react to a small person.

Thank you for writing these stories
person wynja
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES! LOved it! I think I would have died from frustration soon if they hadn't fond eachother... So glad you will focus on this story because it's GREAT and it does deserve it...
person Southwind
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This made my day! I'm soo glad to see an update. Finally, Max and Kasan reunited. I wonder if Kasan will remeber Max admitiing to loving him. Did they never kiss before, now I'll have to read the other chapters again, for like the 9th time! Has Androcoles found himself a mate, hope so.

If you do any other stories with this verse, I'd love to read more about how the Throwback kid and Waran's mate fared!

PLEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON-LIKE!
person butterpie
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woah, now that was just awesome! Androceles and his pack really saved the day, and Kasan and Max had such a smoking hot love connection. This could not have come at a better time as RL has been raining on me alot, so thanks. Glad to see you writing again, so hopefully you, and your family are on the mend, and that is all good.
person BabyVampy
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*screaming in utter joy* Yes!!! Another Chapter! Love love it!! I think I'm going to like Cleo!
person Lina03
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, thank you so much for the update I was so happy when I saw it! I can't wait to read Kasan's POV and his reunion with Max. *squeee!*
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was totally worth the wait :) I absolutely adore this story (and your others too!), your writing style is just perfect and I love your characters immensely. They're just so really and each one is so distinct and individual -! It's not often I care about characters so much, but I really do feel for yours, and because of that it's just so much sweeter when they get their happy ending :) It just so cute, and I really was kept on edge with the suspense too, right up until they found one another :) Really do love your work XD
person bambi4real
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad u updated been waiting forever. This was the best Easter present ever! Max was so sweet in this ch and the explosive sex was expected but I can't wait to hear what they have to say about Max's affinity with the 'dogasaurs'
person Cbs
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing soo much, im soo glad you updated, already I cant wait for more!!! :)
person jdbbrz27
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so freaking amazing and hot. Talk about suspense whew and then when Andro found Max and Max found Kasan and the sex was well amazing loved it makes me wonder though will Kasan take Max so much that Max won't be able to walk for a few days and I can't wait to see what else happens and I loved that little Andro found himself a little mate now that is adorable and maybe they can all learn from eachother and learn how to get along or at least coexist. You are doing an amazing job with this and thank you so much for updating.