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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person your dearest wish
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. I've tried to be patient but Max just told Kassam he loves him and it's getting even more exciting. Please hurry Im having heat pains!!!!!!!! ;) Thanks
person grugster
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best ever! I so love to read it. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Perona
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow hot! definitely worth the wait.
person Rustaam
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After you finish this one you should write Roto and Tisu's story! :D
person eleeland
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! Please update soon!
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... Fucking... Hott... OUTTA CONTROL KASAN IS SEXY AS HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Omg I'm at freakin' WORK and now I wish I was home so I can relieve my horniness!!! Lmao I almost cried, woman! What a mixture of emotions: fear, sorrow, lust, love... They were all such strong emotions that I felt like I was actually inside Max's head feeling what he was feeling. Overwhelmed I am, and the desperate need for the next update is like colossal! lol

YOU'RE STILL MY FAVORITE AFF AUTHOR!!!!!!! <3<3<3
person eleeland
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!! About 75% of the books I have bought don't even begin to touch the quality of the writing and plot line, and the other 25% only equal the brilliance of Twisted Hilarity's writing. A+++ and thank you for writing!
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you! I though I would go mad for the lack of next chapter, but I believe I'll now be able to manage my sanity till the next update. I look forward to seeing where things go from here. I really hope they manage to find Max some human friends later on, if not in this story specificly. It would also be nice if the cat people could figure out that the pink blobs don't like Max, for some reason I imagin that to come out as a funny scene. Also, I am in full support of this world continuing in another story, so please do, and if you get writters block I'm free for conversation. Thank you again for such a lovely alien world. I'll now go sit quietly in wait for your updates. Much love ~bye bye~
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! That was so easy!
After such LLOOOOOOONNGGG SUFFERING of the 'OMG MAX IS STOLEN/KIDNAPPED/LOST phase' and the 'MAD HUNT FOR MAX BEGINS phase' for Kasan to finally get his hands on max just like that! in ONE CHAPTER!
..................................... O___O like. wow. fast. but WOW THANK GOD!

I think... Androcles should be given ALL THE CREDIT for finding Max... So someone had better HELP THE POOR DOG(shokan) before that big other shokan mates him when he's not willing. Coz it sure as hell looked like it.
Androcles sacrificing himself, so that MAx could be set free...... *sniffs* the loyalty..... *eye tears*

SOMEONE BETTER GIVE HIM A PRIZE FOR IT!!!

but wow....
I wondered about, Kasan hurting max, being so.... sex deprived and all... but I guess the nanites help it not hurt. So its good. Would the nanites help max heal? coz there's sure to be bruises and that nasty stuff he stepped on.

but all in all....

They're back together again!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! We can have more smutty scenes yes? please please please? *puppy eyes at you*

- nekoii
person NightRoseFox
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Dies of blood loss from nosebleed* Oh Dear God........I have died and gone to heaven. Not only did you finally get to update this story, but you did it with one of the hottest damn sex scenes ever! I could die happy, but I wanna reas Kassan's reaction to Max professing his love for him, FINALLY! So I will save dieing until the next chapter. As always I am looking forward to reading and update, but want you to take care of yourself and family first. After all we won't get any updates if you aren't doing well right? Please take care, and update soon, okay. Thank you.


~~Aki